Clear take here just more cohesive, advanced and creative. Classy to match content size tho, Saii. SpitFire, try and check out some other battles such as battles by your opponent to get a feel for how we try and do it here. Filling the whole box is the first major key. 

i got yall this is was my first day on here

one sided battle here Winner had beter multis n puns loser got a lot to learn here.

Lol saiyan 

fill the box this aint even that much work got to try harder

please go vote on my battles

Underwhelming battle here. Saii took it by displaying more knowledge of metaphor use and wordplay. 3-5

 Well you need work lol

Miyah, you didn't fill the box and your rhyming was quite simple. I see you are new, so I ain't gonna dog on you too much. Here are some points of advice:

1. Multis, are the capped rhymes they must match syllable wise, and rhyme perfectly. Ensure you are not stretching them for the sake of getting your syllable counts up, they cannot be forced. 

2. Structure, try to have 4 punches for an 8 liner, spending 2 lines per bar.

3. Set-ups, quote the witty parts in your bars that have double meanings, and the set-up should be relevant to your final punch.

@Sai, this bar was okay. Make Believe and Maple Leaf don't sound the same my dude. It is close, but its SLIGHTLYYYY stretching haha. Blazekin punch was decent, and liked the fact that you even made a bar about him haha. I would say Sai took this with better set-ups to his bars, better multi usage, and over-all execution. 

Question, is Miyah a girl? You kept calling him/her - "She".

Anyways, fairs in yall!

lol Saiyan you're a savage motherfucker hahaha, bar was real clever with setups that related to tha concept ... punch landed with good execution

loser seems new, a good example would be readin your opponent's bar, this is how all bars are normally set up on LB (tha "setup" to PUNCH! kinda thing [to make it an easier read]) ... stay active and read battles to help your elevation ... be more direct instead of cypherish to bring more sting to your punches 

fair's in, easy decision here ...

I enjoyed it