IF IM HONEST BOTH WERNT THAT GREAT HERE...... ZEUS STOP PRESSIN 'ENTER' WHEN TYPIN BATTLES, NEXT TIME JUS DO AN 8 LINE BATTLE AN TYPE UNTIL YOU HIT ''8 LINES''..... YOUR ''PENNY PARADES'' WORDPLAY DIDNT WORK AT ALL YOU HAVE TO MAKE SURE BOTH WORDS SOUND ''EXACTLY'' THA SAME WHEN ATTEMPTIN WORDPLAYS, KEEP ELEVATIN THO DUDE WE ALL STARTED SOMEWHERE........ JIZZ HAD SOME OK RHYMES ACTUALLY AN ITS NICE TO READ A VERSE WIT LESS OF THA GAY MATERIAL YOU NORMALLY DROP...... YOU STILL NEED ALOT OF WORK THO, BUT HOPEFULLY YOU CONTINUE DOWN THIS PATH..   VOTE GOES TO JM HERE....FAIR IS DROPPED!

This one is fairly easy to call, one had way more material, and had the stronger bars imo. They weren't exactly set up in a sense of how I think you should, but seeing as this was a 32, and I personally wouldn't of wasted good bars on the reply - so i'm not gonna discredit Jizzmastaa here too much. When reading his verse out aloud, it was pretty smooth. No gay shit thankfully, for my loser, try to select a smaller box size yo, cause a 32 is difficult to fill out, imo. You must fill out the entire box, otherwise you will be docked points by default. Try to set up your punches in a manner in which they look like punch lines, try and spend 2 lines per bar, but in this case since it was a 32, you have the luxury of setting up your bars a little more, so you can spend 3-4 lines per bar. These are more or so, haymakers instead of just jabs/punches. Try to avoid any self hype, unless it helps a punchline become stronger, but most of the time it does not. Fairs in fellas!