Clear take for me here. 2True, welcome and good shit. Here on LB there’s a few things we do with our text verses to make them more complete and readable, such as completely fill the box and cap our rhymes. To get an idea, check out some of the recent battles from your opponent!

Interesting bars Rai ;)

one was more advanced in every aspect, and brought punches that were creative and had sting ... loser seems new, should read some battles to see how other's structure a verse, you should fill tha box too (don't press enter and use line breaks), try linkin your setups in a bar by keepin em on tha same concept w/ creative flips to bring harder punches ... fair's in

2True, when I had my 1st battle the advice I was given was that this is all about punches. So I'll give you that same advice, you need to focus on attacking your opponent and not just trying to rhyme words. 

Rai will win his on punch count alone

GB FV no h8

Ones flow definitely got this for me. Other had some hit and miss shit but the winner kept it fair with the heat thru out his verse. Salute to both emcees

felt this was one sided, rai was much more polished in battle bars, utilizing complexity and content was more creative. multi wise was also stronger and more complex where as 2tru lacked any type of steucture and actual ryming.. u need to focus disses on your opponent not self hype lines. it does no damage. but u will get bwtter with time

It’s not my 1st battle, to all you in the comments. I was on the site years ago, thanks for the advice as well everyone.

My question..... Why do people win mainly on punchlines? When it is a battle that was ticked for everything? That makes no sense! And filling the box??? Could someone elaborate on this please. Also why shorten words? Because sometimes people don’t always understand what you say, or think it means something completely different.

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PRETTY STRAIGHT FORWARD DECISION HERE REALLY, 2TRUE PART WIT THA 'OPEN YOU UP LIKE A MELON' ENDIN WIT THA 'SAVAGERY' PART MADE ME LOL, SAVAGERY WOZ A GOOD CHOICE OF WORD, TRY AN FILL THA BOX MORE NEXT TIME AN CAP ALL OF YOUR RHYMES SO ITS EASIER TO FOLLOW AN READ, THINK OF YOUR MAIN PUNCHLINE FOR THA BAR AND THEN WORK ON SETTIN IT UP SO IT HITS HARDER, KEEP BATTLIN AN YOU WILL ELEVATE YOU COULD ALSO PICK UP A FEW MORE TIPS BY STUDYIN YOUR OPPONANTS VERSE HERE...... DONT NEED TO SAY TOO MUCH TO RAI HERE, EVEN THO THESE WERE THROWAWAYS THA 'BOGGLE' PART WOZ FUNNY AN NICELY WORDED, A VERY SMOOTH AN CLEAN VERSE ACTUALLY...... FAIR IS DROPPED! 

Quite a clear W here for me. One had superior rhyming, structure, creativity. Loser could pick up on seeing how the winner set-up his verse here. 2True, its more of a punch line kinda game on this site, try to get like 4 hits off within a battle. Use the entirety of the text box given to you, I'll check out your next battle and see how you are progressing ! We can go from there. Fairs in fellas, gb! 

4-6, low to high.

2True: Several places you became difficult to understand from abbreviations or misspelling FAM...also a lot of your multies didnt give me a stiffy or was a bit of a stretch for me. However, i do think this is one of your better drops, keep working.

Rai: Obvously in another class than 2True, but just thought this was an OK drop...Almost the whole last line was filler...i get it, you didnt need it, but its a cop out. Regardless, fair is in. Nice Battle!

Solid drop from the winner. He was better in all the components. Not a bad verse from the loser, just that his jabs weren't enough to take down his opponent.