50 cent/power/hit show

S,ay - ese - Mexican slang

Fresh prints / fresh Prince

Not back / knot back

At the end of show the audience clap

Will Smith was in the last scene of fresh prince

One is gettin better, had some hits and misses, try bringing more creative flips as you're bars could've been executed/reworded better to give your punches more sting ... winner had a weird fatigue bar, but overall came with tha fresher and more creative material, punches landed stronger imo, diagnosis line was nice ... fair's in 

MISTER SMITH-

Carry a Llama, but ain't GREAT W/ THE SPITS BRO? said '1' line's strong enough to drop me, I ain't SHAKING A BIT SO you could take the 'power from 50' and wouldn't be MAKING A HIT, SHO!

^^opening line adding in the llama gun reference,  didnt make much sense, as far as relavence to the punch... adding the concept 'a power from 50', seemed a bit random. multis were clean, and clean.. sho /show wordplay.. has been played quite a bit already...

I'll take it a bit slow, STAY CALM AND GET TO RAPPING, it's 'S, ay?' there'll be a 'Mexican wave' if I SAY PALMS ARE MEANT TO SLAP HIM, lettin em' know I'm 'ending the show' when I RAISE ARMS AND GET TO CLAPPING!

^^^adding the wordplay 'S,ay, and mexican wave feels out of place and is quite irelavent to your end punch.. which is using the same nameflip = show /sho.. rule of thumb, if your gonna use nameflips, in each line, try to be creative in how you use his name.. right now your using the most basic /easiest part of his name and flipping it with the most basic name play.. try and find different combinations that use parts of his name .. like sho, or dan, and find words in the english language that contain one of these words, and somehow turn it into a dope punch.. as a whole i wasnt feeling this bar

He got 'rounds of old shit', just SPINNING A VINYL, OCK! No 'fresh prints',your WRITTENS I'LL WRITE THEM OFF! he fell off and 'not back' like being STIFF IN A SPINAL SPOT, so if this your 'last, sho' You 'will' have SMITH IN THE FINAL SHOT!

^^^^^^ again using the same nameflip, you lose points now for doin this for the third straight time.. your setup feels random, and isnt relavent to your end punch, the only thing that works is your incorporation of the fresh prints, which is relavent..but then you reverted back to another wordplay not back which was poorly executed, along with throwin in the word will.... you couldve omitted all of that and kept the fresh prints line, and end punch and had room to do anotherpunch.. 

shodan-

He thinks he rolls with the Street Army and STAYS THE RICHEST IN HIS CORPS, but he wouldn't have “Legal Tender in Hand” if he were BAKING CHICKEN STRIPS IN COURT!

^^^setup started off decent, wit the personal diss, multi flow is off, shouldve said ''if he BAKED THE CHICKEN STRIPS IN COURT... that way the compound words match better.. as a whole, pretty decent opener

I’ve got a gun SO big, you’ll see the FAT EAGLE GET TO HIM! And if he tried to lift it? You’d see the FATIGUE’LL GET TO HIM!

^^^^^this is a nice setup, simple yet relates to the end punch... nice double wordplay..

When it comes to straight aggression? You don't have heavy SCHEMES WHEN SPITTING VIOLENT FLOWS, KID!! And "your lack of humor is sickening" like a GREEK PHYSICIAN'S DIAGNOSIS!

^^^^^^^setup, was basically filler, and couldve been worded to better relate with doctor references, or even startin out by sayin how hes not funny or something... that way it correlates to his lack of humor.. as a punch, nice and original.. which is a plus

I'm winning the right to kill him, you can BET THAT THAT'S TRUE, "I Earn Smith's Head" like METAL STATUES!! (ironsmith's head)

^^^^^^^^^^^setup was okish, finally a nameflip, which was decently executed, and worked both ways... 

in summary. i felt shodan, was more experienced in battle writing and it showed.. smith had  cleaner multis, but lacked in otherareas like concepts, and original creative punches...  hence my vote gives shodan the nod in this one...

Hmm how do I vote on this? 3 sho(w) punches from Mister Smith, and some interesting material from Sho. Were u purposely doing bad bars/jokes? Don’t see it in the comments here. but for example, I refuse to believe you would present the legal tender in court as a serious bar. (It was funny af tho, which is why I think you were going for jokes over bars this battle) Don’t mean to be rude here when I say this but just wanted to see if you could clarify for me.

A DECENT BATTLE, SMITH HAD IMMACULATE FLOW AN SETS UP HIS BARS NICELY.... AN SHODAN THIS IS THA LEAST AMOUNT OF FILLER IVE EVER SEEN IN ONE OF YOUR VERSES LOL, I FUCKS WIT THIS!...... RIGHT TO THA VERSES, SMITH'S OPENIN BAR I REALLY LIKED ACTUALLY I THOUGHT THERE WERE SOME QUIRKY PARTS IN THA BUILD-UPS, I DIDNT LIKE THA FACT YOU USED THA 'SHOW' CONCEPT ON 3 SEPERATE OCCASIONS EVEN THO I LIKED EACH IDEA, THAT TOOK SOME POINTS OFF FROM ME...... SHODANS FIRST BAR WOZ GOOD, REALLY LIKED THA FATIGUE'LL GET TO HIM PART, CLOSING WP DIDNT WORK FOR ME THO IF IM HONEST...... ALL IN ALL ITS A NICE BATTLE, IM GONNA GO WIT SHODAN HERE AS I FELT HE WOZ SLIGHTLY MORE COMPLEX AS A WHOLE AN A LIL MORE ORIGINAL..... GOOD FUCKIN READ THO FROM BOTH SIDES, MY BATTLE FETISH HAS BEEN SATISFIED AFTER READIN THIS, FAIR IS DROPPED!

Dope battle here guys seriously feeling both verses but I kinda feel one was more consistent in what he delivered and his punches where just a bit nicer and executed better.... yall should do a 16 tho .. 

Overall, I felt Shodan had a stronger showing here. Mister Smith was nice with the multies, but so was Shodan, and his lines were more relevant and complex. MVGT Shodan 6-6 (low-high)

fair is in fellas 

nice verses from both ! 

this was very clpse both of u had good use of multis here. ii vote for winner cuz he sightly edged it more i understood his syllables a ittle bit more. fairs in. keep elevating guys.

Close as fuck, I've read this battle multiple times, and I got it edging to Sho due to Mr Smith's not so good WP and played clap line. If it wasn't for the played line, I think I woulda edged this to Smith, though... Shos fatigue line wasn't nice imo, I liked the iron smith bar and your first bar was okay, slightly reaching... Mr smiths first bar and mexican wave bars were fresh as fuck. I would of liked to see something other than Show/Sho WP's though... try to mix it up, one good name play is good enough normally. Once again this is hard as fuck and I can see it going either way. Had to kind of nit pick in order to find a winner. Fairs in yall and good-battle.

6-6, mid-mid