Say What?! it's Apoc!!

Fvgb no h8

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TonganKidd had a super weak drop up until his skateboard lines, cause its kinda true - Volcanine sounds like a skateboard brand haha. The issue with your last bar was you used "YA" at the end of your multi sets twice, try and avoid that. The rhyming you had in your first multi set wasn't clean at all, take a look at this:

- This man couldn't blow up with SEDIMENTARY ROCKS and a stick of DYNAMITE, wanna be "hard on the dark side" like sucklng ESOTERIAN COCK, with spiked punch laced with CYANIDE,

^The # of syllables between Esoterian Cock and Cyanide, should be the same amount between sedimentary rocks and dynamite. How you have extra in one makes it sound awkward imo.

Volcanine made his fair share of mistakes too, rhyming MARRYIN DA and ARIANNA w/ STRAPPED IN TO YA was really bad, tbh. It doesn't sound the same at all, but this punch wasn't bad. It was much more creative than the Son/Pop lines i've been seeing. Wording coulda been cleaned up, The rest of the verse was okay, nothing too hard hitting. Too late/lost ahead of time was a decent idea, that shoulda been expanded on. I wasn't really feeling the whole game show contest thing.

I am slightly leaning towards Volcanine for being more creative (apart from his first bar) rhyming wise, both of yall were a bit iffy I just felt like TonganKidd was way too simple in the middle of his verse where he was just kinda' rhyming and not really bringing a cool concept into the mix.

8 lines, 2 lines per bar, 1 punch per bar should leave you with 4 punches total throughout the verse.

Close as fuck to be honest,

5-5, low to low.