Hello?

So now what happens?

Giving this to burgaboy, Mister Smith would of taken this if he had a little more material, as he was being more aggressive and had some better rhyming in places, try to fill the box fully guys. Size the box down to an 8 if a 16 is too much. More material will always win. Don't press "enter" to go to the next line down, just keep writing until the box caps out.

Fairs in fellas!

Ok ok ok .... new guys on the block let me hit you with some advice real quick ..... 

I’m picking my winner as his lines actually made slight since held a steady rhyme scheme although basic ... 

X’s 6 Rules For Beginners 

rule 1 .... always fill the box 

rule 2 .... on let’s beef 2 lines = 1 bar for example an 8 line battle is 4 bars 

rule 3 .... text is not written like an audio battle in text you have more chance to showcase complexity in wording and rhyme scheme etc 

Rule 4 .... pick a rhyme scheme and master it letsbeef is dominated by multi syllable rhyming when it comes to text followed by punchlines 

rule 5 ... learn how to write metaphors and similes these will help you with punchline 

rule 6 ... keep it relevant your whole bar should be relevant to the punchline at the end. If your punch is about cocaine then the whole bar should be too so don’t start it off by rhyming about fucking his Mum and then finishing it with a cocaine punchline. 

burgaboy just bought more to the table both of u need to completley fill the box. i felt like i was ready a poetry sermon than a rap battle so u gotta really hard on this one. burgaboy 'worst than a bentley'? a bently is a luxerious mortor vehicle people are attracted to. and what did u rhyme with 'tension'?  and mister ham on burger is opposite of vegans digest. a vegan is a person that doesent eat meat. and ur attempted to shoot ur own gun? u guys need to edit  raps so they make sense.

The whole point of a battle is to punch (disrespect) your opponent. You both rhymed but your verses were more like a cypher than a battle verse. Burgaboy had more material but Mister Smith threw more direct punches and flowed better. Fairs.

Despite having less content , my winner actually attempted to diss the opponent here and came with more battle ready lines. I couldn’t just give it to the dude with more lines this time around , Because they were lines about nothing. To both, try and fill the whole box. fv

winner had more materials than the loser.. Both got a long way to go though. I suggest y'all peep some old battles here and see how its done here