Both need help w/ structure, but felt ones rhyming and bars were a bit harder, my loser just had some soft concepts, that I wasn't feeling, and the winner had some errors in terms of repeating words that hes rhyming, but leaning this way, fairs in yall!

Interesting battle at4 haven’t seen any of your shit before now and I must say not bad ... digging the Multies flow and rhyme scheme good flexing of you muscles some ok puns or at least the ability to show you understand .... Jizz how is your style changes battle to battle so much pick a writing style and stick to it man I get your maybe experimenting to find this which is coo but this is not the one to stick with... fair is in .:X:. 

appriciate you X

X-Calibur <APOC> feelin yo maaaan but jizzin iz waaat i do but i'll tone it down to Lite-Jizz-Mastaaa :D