Hmmm, I think FLY's last bar was BOTB. Although, he didn't fill the box and also had the word Asphyxion - which I don't believe is a real word, just saying lmao. The pole position line was played, but after that you had some good rhyming in the last section which ultimately lead to a decent bar. I can't give you the W for just one good bar though, H1Z1 didnt come with anything amazing, had some pauseworthy wording that hindered the start of his verse by quite a bit, but ended nicely... If it wasn't for the fact that FLY didn't fill the box, and the pole position line - I would given him this in a heart beat.

Fairs in, good-luck both !

FLY you new round here??? Haven’t seen your name crop up .... you need to step it up a lil sonny .... don’t CAPS word’s that don’t rhyme makes your verse read hella awkward .... got my winner just a step above all round really ... .:X:. 

That flyswatter like was jus better than what H1Z1 put... but also fly you need to clean that up a lil bit. FV based on creativity

Flyonier i think u got potentional but fill in the box and few of ur multis i think were broken. So work on it. H1Z1 u were definitley much better with word play and punches. But id say law low on the too much quotations and line spaces between words. its kind of throwing me off a bit. but besides that not bad.

Gave this to H1 based on having more content and more cohesive punches. Fly was a good showing for sure, but need to fill that box up first and foremost, and then try to also achieve higher rhyme syllable counts than 2 or 3. GB FV, GL guys!

H1Z1 has better word choice in attack, it's expected from experineced writer.