I see potential. But lil folks rhyme scheme at the beginning with "lil" making every scheme a one syllable rhyme. Not gonna fly. Setups and punches need polished from loser. And I see some broken multis. Fv, gl to both

La rue had the easier to read verse, and the better rhyming imo. If loser kept the pace up like his first 2 lines, woulda' gone the other way. Close one though.... LaRue try to "set-up" your "PUNCHES!!!" You just rhyming and hitting him w/ straight forward stuff. Gotta be witty.

one's banned and his verse was all over tha place imo, no relevant correlation between concept and execution ... tha other seems to have improved a bit, multis were better, punches didn't land tho, i'd say set up a punchline THEN focus on tha multi, makin sure it's relevant to your punch and also tha concept ... fairs in

Larue fir the knockout. His opponent has good potential needs a lil sharpening fir those bars to Penetrate fir Ws. Lil folkz reppin the chi. [God Bless the Land, South side] low end or No end bruh

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Are you all Brothers “Lil” Wayne you uncle or some shit lol .... ok to the verse in hand this was rather one sided both had some funny lines but bother need some serious elevation .... my winner got this based on a better understanding of what is needed for a text verse . To my loser go peep the forums for some tutorials that’ll help you up ya penmanship ... fair as always .:X:. 

Folkz you gotta be creative and try not to repeat the same words only words that sound the same winner had a more experience and decently written verse

Almost a tie imo.Both parties lacked some punches. I gave it LaRue because he had some smooth multies. Fairs in

Chicago dudes are crazy bro. I have no idea who this guy is but using "Lil" in a rap name is just really popular these days. E.g. Lil Peep, Lil Skies, Lil Yachty. Yeah...