Welcome to LB bro. 

Nice little spar here H1Z1 good tonsee yiu improving and learning and progressing your verses each time I read them they are getting better keep pushing .... onagain unfortunatley for you bro you’ve come up against someone who has a better understanding of this text battling doesn’t mean you can’t grow yourself to the next level .... first words of advice is the full the text box make the most of the space allowed for your verses to sit in ... secondly peep some of the forums for tutorials on how to write Multies etc .... keep at it tho fellas .:X:.

fair vote no hate 

Welcome to LB homie! Try and check out some of the other cats around here to get a sense of how much you should write and how to try and structure your verse. H1, good stuff man had some nice lines in there 

Fairly clear victory here.

OnAgain, you had a okay verse for like a song on a beat, with good vocal effects. That shit won't get you far here, you need to try to think of it as a matter of "punchlines" and try to get as many hits as possible, you want to set up an idea, into a witty punch. Check out some of my recent text battles to get a better understanding of this, hope I helped.

Fairs in.

Both had the right idea but the winners experience showed here. Both brought some shit but one came out on top fairs in

H1Z1, yhall haters suck

felt my winner here was stronger in every aspect, multi usage to simple concept usage... loser seems to be a beginner and could use a bit more practice, in how to utilize the box more efficiently , you got the basics of bar writing ,now implement multi syllable s and similes to diss your opponent

Tiny get out your feelings and just vote,  keep your queef bitching to yourself. 

HZ had a more hard hitting verse with decent punches and nice wordplays.  OnAgain needs to peep some old battles on the site and familiarise himself with the format.Fairs in

h1z1 was much better he had the good multis and wordplay onagain fill up the box man