woaaaah @Kona spits nice. I like this dude

Bill the butcher is the gang leader in the movie gangs of new york 

cheers axxxurate dope drop

RedRibbon AndroidBoyz..Axxx in here swining

Both need hella improvement, the constant rounds / metal bars from axxxurate were just losing thier sting. Alot of played material also, like the whole joint capped thing has been done x100. Just not too much creativity, from Axxxurate, who I think started really well, if he kept that kinda freshness to his bars woulda been a ez win. KONA, can you please utilize the space bar that is located on the lower section of your keyboard? ...that being said I think that you took this with the back hand a judge flip and the bill the butcher line. This one close though, I think if Axxxurate had one more strong bar in there could of gone his way -I wasn't feeling the fact he called charity work "frees".... just a reach imo. Fairs in, this was close though... im focusing on the negatives so yall know what to fix, hate me for it if you want to.

When I said round / metal bars, I mean he literally talked about gun play from start to finish. 

yeah seul will do man thanks for the tips brotha

Say What?! it's my man Kona from Apoc!!

Androidz!

Axxx is very obviously a multi-acc or has done this before. Flows nice and rhymes were clean. Solid punches. This was a good kona too, I just think sometimes you sacrifice readibility of ur verse to cram in those Multis. Maybe a bit more of a balance would do you favours

Yo hyena... thanks for the hate vote...just to show everyone after hyena voted this is wat he pm me...I read fully and I get ur bars faggot, u spent 3 lines on a punch that basically reads “I drop bombs like bombs” and the only link throughout was “battlefield”, verse was hard to read...Bill the butcher didn’t even rhyme with anything lol...Tf does it mean that u “smacked a fake vote”....

Nice I’m copy n paste with no context. Any mod that would like to review the whole IM exchange is welcome. Kona came after me very aggressively for no reason and I initially stayed polite but he continued doing so, so I responded with My true thoughts on the battle . Everything I said there is facts and does not reflect a hate vote whatsoever. Please get this child away from me.

this wat u said riteI read fully and I get ur bars faggot, u spent 3 lines on a punch that basically reads “I drop bombs like bombs” and the only link throughout was “battlefield”, verse was hard to read as mentioned, there’s too long between ur multisnow look..

i took the same first bar but from axxx 8

I "cross bars in your circle" like the SIGN OF A DOCTOR .. my "Nina finna pack these punches n roll u out" said my NINE FINNA BOX YA .. put the "metal in the pull up socks" like im TRYING FOR SOCCER .. U See I'm "fly with these rounds on top" like I be RIDING A CHOPPERtell me exactly how SIGN OF A DOCTOR (dr signiture) NINE FINNA BOX YA (pistol ref) and TRYIN FOR SOCCOR .....link that bar tgether..my bar is consistant throughout with either battling..rapping..battlefield or bombs the concepthis has 4 completly diffrent ideas outta fukkin nowhereyet u voted against me because of that point.. u just fukkin said it lol its not about my bars could be better its about are they better than the person im battling ur a fukkn moron n a hater bro

AXXX is dope this aint a low blow at him his obviosly got skills, but every bar is about NINES FINNA POP ... this is soley about hate voting and morons fukkin up battles ... facts

That’s lookin like a swaaaaaaaay my guy, watch that. Besides, I can’t believe how upset not getting “Mc hyena”s vote on a random 8 line text battle made you. Just send me our battle so I can block you after.

its bigger than u hyena.. the way voting goes 50% of the time on LB is fukkd up..theres not much in this..but u n i both no the reason behind ur vote and the lack of thought u put into it, if u went to a live battle and 3 retards from the crowd voted at the end with no thought or real points ppl would be like WTFFFFF n thats exactly wats happnin here .. or more so..tactical hate voting ... u can live wit it fine ... me personally i like to try vote wit integrity n as fair as possible wit real comments n thoughts but hey thats jus me.. now get to blockin anyone who asks u questions u cant answer u bitch .. fuk outta here

So I got bored and actually read what you wrote. Cross bars in your circle is not about a doctors signature it’s about the actual logo like a Red Cross type thing. Also connects with soccer. Nine in the box connects with soccer (the no.9 or striker, in the attacking box) and then the metal / sock is self explanatory. So that punch actually does carry itself through. I was happy to stop responding but i wanted to point that out since you don’t even understand the bars youre trashing. Please don’t respond again to me I’ve done enough explaining and it’s getting ridiculous it’s a bad look for you bro honestly.

dickhead u said my first bar didnt connect at all..so i picked a random bar from axxx's dope ass drop rite...picked his first bar...my first bar that u say doesnt have any connections is based on the game battlefiel, or battlefields war how every u wanna take it.. also a play on the fact this is a battle obviosly...no ps4 dis my 'battlefield'this bastard thinks he's gonna SLAUGHTER MEN?YOUR KIDDING ME RIGHT??theres no way this guy'll stop tha TORTURE WEN IM KILLING THE MIC bro ur 'canon fodder k Bombs dropping like MORTARS N ARTILLERY STRIKES..... i reffrence battlefield in the first few words..SLAUGHTER MEN is self explanatory..torute wen im killing the mic should also be..canon fodder and artillery strikes also are clearly links to the idea for the bar...making ur point wrong .. heres wat u said....I read fully and I get ur bars faggot, u spent 3 lines on a punch that basically reads “I drop bombs like bombs” and the only link throughout was “battlefield”, droppin bombs is not the main part of this bar BATTLEFIELD is weather its a rap battlefield or the game battlefield or an actuall battlefield.. im not saying this bar is dope.. stop twisting shit...so this 3 lines was only me saying i drop bombs on bombs and has no links?/ ur still sticking wit that cos i clearly jus proved that complete nonsense u fukkin idiot...AGAIN this is not about axx not being able to spit, the reason i think my 8 was better is because of the creativity n thought behind it, axx is technically pretty dope, but not that fuckin dope yet.. his whole 8 was about pulling a nine..he said FINNA 3 times im finna pop nines al the way thru.. how many nines do u think this guy has actually even fukkn seen... its boring and played out.. if ur gonna argue be fukkin real for once.. u fukkin pussy

THIS IS TOO MUCH COMMENTS SO LOOK HERE IMA SUM IT UP N BE REAL....wat u are saying is my 3 lines is only about dropping dombs n thats y u voted against me ... IF that was true..then ur saying 3 lines about NINES(pistols) is better than 3 lines about bombs..rite? DICKHEAD

SHOULD WE GO TO UR NEXT POINT ON HOW BILL THE BUTCHER DOESNT RHYME WIT ANYTHING IN MY VERSE OR U GONNA SHUT THE FUK UP NOW?? COS IM HAPPY TO RIP U APART ON EVERY COMMENT 

YOU TOOK THE TIME TO FIGURE OUT THE MEANINGS AND 'LINKS' IN HIS BARS BUT CLEAAAARLYYY YOU DIDNT WITH MINE... WHICH THANK U VERY MUCH FOR POINTING OUT THAT TAKES ME RIGHT BACK TO MY FIRST N ONLY POINT - YOU HATE VOTED U DIDNT EVEN READ MY 8 PROPERLY FUUUKKKKK OUTTAAAA HEEEREEEE

STOP THE HATE VOTES PEOPLE...READ BATTLES N COMMENT FAIRLY- THATS MY ONLY POINT HERE

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God damn Kona I didn't know you could multi like that OG. Loser was nice too but got over took with punches and wordplay in general

APOC !!!!! KONA GROWING INTO THAT GRIZZLY !!! 

Kona bro calm down. It ain't that serious bro. They say 'If you don't have haters, you not doing something right'. So appreciate the haters. [If that's what the case truly is] but any way s back to the battle. Axx had a better drop broken yes in some places but took it fir me w his creativity. Kona had the W in the beginning but it kinda went down hill a bit towards the end. Nice drop from both. And stop the violence. This ain't FREESTYLE FRIDAY lol