Alright,

SPACE_DABREE, in your first bar you are capping words that don't rhyme, the body hit the floor shit was nice - but it was hindered due to the fact that it wasn't really set up that well. Second punch, sever shit sickly - wasn't really that strong, the rhyming is also off HANDLE YOU / SEVER SHIT? The ready to lose an arm bar, was okay - it wasn't amazing but I guess not totally shit, I personally would of tried to word it better, and once again here, you are capping words that don't rhyme. READY / HAVE TO... this continues throughout the rest of the verse... Your closer was probably your best idea but, once again hindered by wording and rhyming. My advice to you would be this, don't force yourself to do big multi sets, work with the amount of syllables you are most comfortable with and try to increase it over time. I think in terms of setting up your punch you also need to start thinking of the bar as, "The final punch HAS to tie into the set-up" otherwise, its wasted space - I do the same thing sometimes, I feel like I can always set up my bars a little better. Good-luck in that task.

X-Calibur,

Liked the first bar & Liked the whole NASA / Space Get Played bar. They werent godlike tier, but they were decent. It's "Amish" by the way xD. I thought the third bar was okay, I have seen the whole Bars / Reception thing done before, but this is aight. Closer was probably your weakest bar, imo. At this point, its the third name flip and I want to see something else creative-wise from you. Not only that, I think it was your worst name flip and you used it as your closer. Smashing Watches / Time To Debis just sound like a reach to me.

Ultimately, I think the amount of mistakes SPACE_DABREE made only further cemented his fate. X-Cal brought some decent stuff here, but I am sure it is not his highest quality work. Decent battle here, just being honest and explaining why I made my choice. Fairs in.

Huh so let me get this straight you say jugde me by different standard than him because you say it don't rhymes individually but it rhymes as a whole he used the same format either way dog your bias and you did all that splaining for no reason and jealous because your bars are not entertaining at all

Apoc tho 

I ACTUALLY THINK THAT WOZ A GOOD BREAKDOWN FROM SEUL, SURELY SPACE YOU WOULD PREFER PPL TO EXPLAIN THEIR VOTES RIGHT? UNLIKE YOU AN YA BUDDIES WHO JUS VOTE FOR EACHOTHER WITHOUT READIN AN PUT ''VOTED'' OR ''FV VB'' SMH....... APOCALYPSE!!!!

You know what, Space? If you actually listened to everything I wrote in that earlier comment -you'd actually improve. If you think my bars are whack, just send me 8.

Your vote sound like you just wanted to provoke a battle with me just ask next time done

Who are my buddies hvk???????

You and you buddy's vote like they are grading a book report not a rap verse talking about caps gtfoh how do the verse sound what did I say

Lmao, Space - I broke it down for you because you are still on the beginner stages of battling. I was trying to help you elevate, I know that X has a better grasp of the text battling basics here - so i didn't grade him on that, cause it was already down pat. Sorry if I hurt your feelings. Stay up. 

This was a nice ass battle here.  X came out his slumber . Dint let him get hot.  Shit get real. Space bro i see you boy!