one seems to be slowly improving whilst tha other seems to be new ... with that said, my winner had a better format and attempted to be more complex, even though multis need to be worked on and ideas were not connected very well ... loser was a bit homo and that's not nice (espically saying "i Should put my penis on your ass Damn it feels Good" jeeeez lol) ya should read more battles and see how others structure their verses ... fairs in 

SPACE killed it....Sai gotta get more complex bro FAIRS IN :)

For my loser, just remember to fill the space completely! Never hurts to get back to the basics and back to the drawing board

Both needs work but Space was def better.