Jay diamond, Bongo bear , Nervous should not vote on this please. 

Ok a few things the Winner came with decent bars that should have hit harder but in the long run still decent to win the battle loser should rhyme and if he did I couldn't really tell but he came with lines that would hit only if it rhymes fv no hate

the deadman vote yupp gb bub Voted: Vegeta / DOG PACK
Posted on: 2018-05-01 18:59:21

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Okay, in terms of metaphor mastery both are good. Neither is great and to be great menas you bring up a metaphor at least 2 lines after than the one you brought up a simile/metaphor and use that in another analogy-pun of some kind. Neither did this.This is why neither can get above 8/10 as for me the only thing that can get 9/10 without doing this is such beautiful syllable sliding and undeniable flow which I feel neither had as they both had to emphasise what to say louder and slower than the rest etc but that's fine enough.

I don't like that Rappintor has some 'filler lyrical skill' what I mean is this: "Dead man walking i can kill this fool well sleep walking"... " my opponent can ONLY win when the world hates me PUBLIC ENEMY NUMBER ONE uno wild card full set BITCH I WON!" In both of these, the metaphor is kind of null because the ending is merely a tautology of the first (they prove each other true but neither hits for the other, they are both support-form of the metaphor). Deadman has this same issue when he says " Imma WRECK THIS BITCH W/ MY TECHS, take the W after dropping LESS N KILL W/ MY TEXTS!" as well as "You don't even craft a bar in a correct sense, for you my MULTIS ARE TOO GOOD"

You don't 'hit' with a defensive line. Bigging yourself up is fine absolutely but that was clearly a hit-metaphor buildup until you ended with a self-endearment rather than an offensive insult.

I am a bit confused really what either rapper was trying to convey. Deadman clearly was trying to imply he is faster and stronger but never quite made this hit hard with a real life relevance to his enemy. Okay fine, fine he mentioned Tor being a bad browser... (it's not it's the browser that around 87% of hackers use but if you use Tor on this website you can be confused for another Tor user and banned for multi-accounting so do it at your own risk, same for VPN usage as it will make them think your real IP is fake too).

Honestly since the Tor line was as soft and strange in the hit as the deadman vs zombie relevance because there isn't something inherently negative about Tor as a browser nor being a soon-to-be zombie I am just confused... 1, 10,11,15?????? What? It doesn't matter if you bodied 15 others, this is about how you are superior to deadman. If he bodied less than 15 say it, don't assume we will infer it.

good try by both and definitely a tie in my eyes.

For me, the hashtags could have been used far far more creatively than what Deadman did so since it forced me to pick a iwnner, I pick Rappintor.

I'm sure DeaDMaN went easy on RAPpintor. Rap didn't really had any multies, DeaDMaN had some but some of them were pretty much broke. Fair vote in

JPOC !