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good first verse bub you got the vote gb Voted: David Karesh / SPACE_DABREE
Posted on: 2018-05-01 15:36:11

The won goes to the one that came with harder hitting lines loss had multis but not really that much of a hit for his verse

STRANGLY QUICK IMPROVMENT WELL DONE NO H8 GB

TUXEDO HAD BETTER STRUCTURE BUT ALOT OF THOSE MULTIs WERE HELLA FORCED ESPECIALLY AT THA START OF YA VERSE, SPACE LACKS STRUCTURE BUT THA FIRST HALF OF YOUR VERSE WOZ QUITE GOOD, DIDNT LIKE THA 2ND HALF IT WOZ REAL INCONSISTANT COMPARED TO THA FIRST HALF....... ONCE SPACE FIXES THAT STRUCTURE UP THO HE COULD START CLIMBIN THAT LADDER......THIS IS PRETTY CLOSE, I FELT ONE SET UP THERE PUNCHES A LIL BETTER HERE WHICH HAS MADE ME LEAN ONE WAY SLIGHTLY....... FAIR IS DROPPED!

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Homophobia combined with death-threatening and elderly man... Basic rule of the hood; worship thy elders. In any gangster-oriented place, you respect the elderly and the young.

Whatever, that aside, Space Dabree's creativity was not jaw dropping but definitely superior to Tux's. From lemon and chicken going together he even flipped the attack on 'old bitches' against Tux by basically saying 'sure you can beat up old people but I can make you as weak as one'. The ability to syllable slide the last 4 rhyme s(prom night through to Klendike) with very little difference in the pacing of the syllables of each line was astonishing flow-wise but the reason I only give a 7 out of 10 is I feel he never connected the metaphors of the line before well enough to any later on. If he had done this even once it would have got him 8/10 for me.