APOCALYSPE!!

Gb winner to this with a better read and the bars where generally better fv

APOCALYPSE ALL IN THIS BITCH LIKE A 50FT DILDO!

good verse first drop bub was good enough to win was some good lines Voted: Polo5 / KG The Prince
Posted on: 2018-05-01 15:35:43

Gb fv

Well well well, what do we have here....polo5 just lyrically did this to MC KG https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=HFrFLzJ9H9c

I want to say that both rappers do not have a clue how to flow... I understand bending the flow and taking advantage of text for complex bars but this is literally not flowable at all (both of you)... I am not quite certain either was listening to a beat while writing their bars and would constructively criticise both on that matter.

It is very obvious to me that Polo5 is a lot newer to rap itself, not just this website, than MC KG is and this did indeed play into why I have given him the win. MC KG is spitting extremely generic bars and what I mean by that is that while the metaphors carry over in the same line, they never come up again later like where did this hands-together metaphor connect to anywhere else in the rap other than the line of clap vs praying itself? Polo5 didn't even say he was religious or hint at it.

Polo5 equally did this but I can tell he was completely making up random metaphors in his head rather than well-practised arsenal wielding which is what MC KG was doing and should have hit much, much more eloquently with the metaphors than he did carrying them across bars and making them hit home with cruel punchlines.

I don't think that Polo5 knows that a pun is not generally a word that is pronounced the same for 2 spellings and that this form of pun is the single weakest there is out of the pun/punchline arsenal a rapper should have. I dont hate what he did with "all full" and "forward" (which for those who didn't realise it, made the 'step forward' into Stepford Wives reference where he's the abusive husband with the whip). The fact that the Stepford was so ridiculously hard to catch because of how he worded it is a major issue for me, even people who knew about Stepford Wives wouldn't catch that but I am an extremely intelligent understander of rap so I just thought I'd highlight his attempt at ingenuity there.

Polo 5 takes the trophy furthermore because he tried very hard and is clearly very very new to rap with huge potential to be a punchline-focused rapper much like Minaj and Madchild.

^^^ This dudes more fucked in the head than me