Catching that cage vibe. Fuckin dope

Clear winner. Probably a large experience gap between y’all. So my winner was brilliant with using his multis to set up his punches. I appreciate his structure and word play as well. My losers lines were awkward. They were creative, like the the EXXON-CHECKS GONE bit. Keep battling and you’ll get better, don’t get discouraged. 

Temper, with the creativity. thoe both were good.

APOCOLYPSE!!

YEAH ITS DEFINATELY APOC IN THIS MUFUCKA!!!!!! KONA ON THA RISE!!!!

7-3 verse 1 gb Voted: KONA / DeftnessTemper
Posted on: 2018-04-17 13:31:04

APOC MFS WATCH OUT

Kona straight shoved the pear of anguish up this dudes asshole! Easy win

hahahah

newcastle huh? main man your some fuckin trash i can take an L no prob but atleast i got more wins then your trash ass . how the fuck u lose 94 times? aye Kona this your mans???

GB temp 

One had punches that were low sixes the other flowed on a ok level. No dirct hiits . the rattle line was not that hot but the set up made it seem like a punch. 

Stuffed pets line was the bezt of battle. It was direct. Weak but direct with a ok set up at your level and it also was a punch .

Fv in

Get that structure together

Fv 

KONA: You've got the multiple rhyming down but you need to work on your punchlines and having more creative concepts. Stock Control idea was okay, teeth was played and the baby / rattle concept was played too. Overall you've got the right idea, just need to refine the structure / get fresher ideas.

DeftnessTemper: Same crituque for you as well but you didn't attack your opponent as directly, mostly self-hype. Work on setting up punchlines to hit harder.

Overall decent battle but one edged this imo, fair's in fellas.