Killed it with that forshadowing - four shadow wing!

Loser had nice come back that constrictor,  I'm stricter hell lose his breathing was nice.  But vet had better edge here.  Fire from both.  

one came harder with the punches, i think tongan kid, could be decent if he works on his vocabulary and structure. Felt as if shodan is trying to be overly political in a rap battle, this is a rap battle and not a cypher! tongankid had his battle head on, shodan had this laidback, historical,political approach, it just don't cut it for me in a battle

Tongan was ripping, Shodan was...

Well, Tongan was ripping. I'll give Shodan some credit for being the instigator, since that allowed Tongan to reply, but Tongan's was clearly better.

Thanks for the votes. No hate 

Not much to see here, but I like the style of Shodan in this one. Re-using the same rhyme in different ways is a trick from the old days lol but it went well with your verse. Felt Tongan needs to clean up his multies and actually throw some punchlines

OK......SHODAN I THINK YA TRIED TO BE TOO CLEVER HERE AN TBH ITS TAKEN ALOT OF STRENGTH AWAY FROM YA VERSE, I LIKED SOME OF THA IDEAS YOU HAD BUT THERE WAS WAYYYYYY TOO MUCH FILLER AN NOT ENOUGH RHYMES AN PUNCHLINES, YOUR OBVIOUSLY INTELLIGENT AN I BELIEVE IF YOU FIX UP YA STRUCTURE YOU COULD BE A BIG PLAYER, BUT WORK NEEDS TO BE DONE......   TONGAN HAD A BETTER FLOW AN HIS SET-UPS AN PUNCHES WERE STRUCTURED BETTER, YOU REALLY NEED TO WORK ON YOUR MULTI RHYMES THO BRO AS A FEW WERE BROKEN AN THA SYLLABLES DIDNT MATCH UP, FOR EXAMPLE ''GRAB-A-HOLD-AN-SQUEEZE-HIM''(6 syllables) ''HE'LL-LOSE-HIS-BREATH-IN''(5 syllables)  THA SYLLABLES NEED TO MATCH UP OR THA MULTI IS 'BROKEN', YOU HIT WIT SOME FUNNY PUNCHLINES THO...... ONE DID A LIL MORE TO WIN THIS IMO, FAIRS IN..... ITS NOT HATE I JUS LIKE TO EXPLAIN MA VOTE CLEARLY AN GIVE POINTERS, BETTER THAN ME JUS PUTTIN 'VOTED' OR 'FVVB' lol.......peace