#REDCLOUD 

Good try my nigga 

Really close match both o' ya got bars!

Close, so close, soooooo close but Rusty's style and his flow got me. Dope battle ya'll

da real DT good win brotheren you got this battle im voteing for you your lines was alright could be tighter but you put good options in your verse that's why im voteing for you bro Voted: Dessaline / Thaa MaCc Era
Posted on: 2018-04-02 18:23:12

Da Real DT aka Paper Rock DT: I didn't get the connection between over seas / c in relation to Dave Chapelle Stand Up, either way not that impressive use of wordplay, K Michelle line was okay but I felt it had too much filler (like spray the shells propa didn't relate to the ending punchline) next 2 lines were pretty much the same, overall it had too much filler imo, felt there was jabs but nothing that hard hitting. Set-ups could've connected better as well. Giving you a 5, I feel like you could've done a lot better.

Rusty Gr8ness: Opener was good but then you went downhill from there, from there it was small jabs multi's but it was mostly filler. Ending wasn't that great either, I didn't see how "Drilling this man's heath" was a set-up to something. Overall I'd say working on getting the rest of your lines like the opener where you have relevant set-ups to your punchlines and hard hitting punches as well. Giving a 4 for this one.

Overall I felt like this battle could've been better, I've seen better from both of you but one barely edged. Fair's in fellas.