i guess Smirk, came more creative.

one just edged this out in almost every catagory. neither really wowed me at any point, especially one..where the other had hit n miss but at least soe were landing, the other needs to work o technique and rhyme structure in a major wayyyy.......RedRibbonFVish

Smirk seemed to have a more creative assualt here, Good battle, fairs innnn

One had better punch game fv in

Smirk your wording was weird throughout the verse, made it hard to follow. The first line was something you don't see every day with concepts but the rhyme was barely there. Okay rhyme schemes afterwards. Started to get somewhere near the end but it was the end. Like I said improve your wording to make it a better a read.

Zakwon you really did make an effort to use the multis I see. I agree with the sentiment that if you're gonna cap rhymes, make every syllable rhyme or at least as close as possible. You kind of lose your main message pushing the limits of how many multis you can do and I feel that's what happened here.

I gotta give it to Smirk for the concepts and staying consistent. zakwon I think you me lost with the going too long on the multis. Good battle guys

Felt as the winner had a better concept with better wordplay loser was on to something but didn't really feel it fv no hate

I think one was a bit better here, slightly. I am giving this to ZaKwon for better use of multis, and inner rhymes. Although both conceptually needed work, SmirkK's Picasso line could of came out hard as fuck if he set it up and fixed up the execution, and on the other hand Zakwon had some weird multi sets, they seemed pretty forced. Its a tough thing to get around, and I am still working on getting better at that myself. It was very easy to see in Zak's piece though. Fairs in fellas, shoot me a message if you need some tips.

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I thought zak took this win with doper multies and punches.

felt  like winner was just a bit better at the punch s beside that i rekcon close but i might be wrong im just starting to learn

close  shit man by a hair gb fv in