Winner had stellar use of multis and clever punches. Loser losy steam near the end and that definitely impacted the overall performance of the verse. 

Fv

Alright Bastard, heh, you started to stretch your rhymes. Rhymes like capitalism and rap precision don't work. A lot of them didn't work because not every syllable rhymed as much as I've seen done before. You tried to go for the throat on this one which is the mindset you need. Don't lose that, you've got that to your advantage

Cake you had a good first line, already ahead of the trend off the jump. I especially dug your writes. Look there were a few lines which I didn't vibe with but all in all the writes were pretty impressive. Concepts we're better expressed. Painted the picture perfect. Wordplay was there. Good showing

tramp a lean was dope and my winner was funny thru out both were dope tho this was closer than a thought. one edged it soz fv no h8

Winner won with his punchlines and metaphors loser wasn't bad but winner took it