'Dyfunctional western' is what it's meant to say lol

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You're IN LOVE WITH A LEMON / and that had no relevance at all but You're so whack I can even waste this next bar, SIX HUNDRED AND SEVEN / I will LICK ONE FROM A WEAPON and QUICK BUST AT YOUR HEAD'N / put the gun away like a 'PISSED COMFORTABLE TEXAN from a scene in a DYSFUNCTIONAL WESTERN' / You're really down to ride with that DICK SUCKING DISCRETION / Coz When it comes to votes, you'd even DRINK CUM FROM ERECTIONS / Truss, you dont even really need a BIG BROTHER INSPECTION / To prove You be 'cramming that box with fake bullshit' like a RIGGED RUSSIAN ELECTION /

Lord Moor your cadence was good. Rhyme complexity should be improved from 2 syllable rhymes. I liked the Guinness toasting to brilliance line, that was nice. Try to paint an image of what you're rapping about. I see glimpses where you're able to do it but not consistent enough yet. Like you're last line, don't engage me in the ring, Tolkien charcter sweeter than ice cream. You should've used a phrase from Lord of the rings instead of using ice cream to wrap the scheme up nice.

Right away Wurz already has more complex rhyming. I'm not sure what a pissed comfortable Texan or what a dysfunctional Western movie is. How can you be pissed and comfortable at the same time. The descriptive words your using, confused the message a bit. A little pauseworthy with drink cum erection line. You ended off your verse on a solid note.

s'all good K! check above for the full 8 without mistakes.

Also in the UK pissed also means drunk

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