Bars

GL and Respect bro 

Lord Moor the one aspect you need to address is structuring. Just rap how you would talk to a person if you actually we're pissed at them. Fitting the wordplay should only come after that. Get the flows down pat and push onwards. Good ideas expressed but with a little extra spice can be executed much better.

Glad to see you've come back from retirement. 6 months has gone by real fast. The beginning rhyme scheme felt unnecessarily long. If you would've cut out the middle part of that scheme and slap the two ends together it would have been presented much better. The extra syllables just allow a greater of the syllables not to rhyme alike which is what happened. You we're pacing steady for some time and landed with the math line which was good. Although instead of saying math literate fans, you could say something like a mathlete for added emphasis. What can I say you tailored made this verse for Moor and he didn't do the same. Btw you use an awful lot of clothes bars.

Lord Moor needs better structuring. Nice bars thou.. MaCc Da Bully GOD went hard w the opener and took it forward like a boss! GOOD Battle Yall

this was a dope battle one just edged it for me no h8 #respect