i think moor came with a better battle verse, altho i could be wrong.

Respect bro

Forensic I like what you got going so far. Definitely build upon on your multis because those sound nice by themselves already. What you should work is your punching ability. Punching takes correct timing and it's meant to be more directed to your opponent. Also the ending scheme's idea needs to be more clear.

Lord Moor your verse fell off near the end. It felt liked you squeezed out the good cadence into the first half of your verse because that was good. Nice repetition in the rhyming pattern, I liked that. My advice is if your gonna include names in an open drop, flip it good or at least subtly. No point using it otherwise, you feel me.

Dammnit forgot to post my vote but I gave it to Lord Moor since he got straight to the point quicker. Both have improvement to do but have shown promise as well

I can relate to my winner

Loser here needs to encorporate punches into his scheme. Punches are pivotal, they decide battles. 

My Ws gotta work on consistency. But won with the punches. 

GB bois fv no hate