Seul had the basics down here, his execution and multies were a lot cleaner/slicker. However I think he needed to tweak the concepts of the last bar a tad. That fell pretty flat to me and you gotta make every inch of the box count in an eight bar. Hummer you started off with a broken multie. Even if the multie wasn't broken, a nine syllable rhyme scheme is pretty overwhelming for an eight bar. This made the read harder and didn't give your verse the good start it needed. A couple of your lines lacked originality. The beef double meaning for example. I mean that's overdone and didn't exactly have the best flip on it anyways. Seul got this for me as I felt his punches were of a higher standard, while hummer has a few more things that need to be worked on (multies, creativity, wordplay/double meanings). I read this back and felt I was slightly negative, the battle was a good read. I'm just making sure I go into further detail as people been on my dick recently about my votes. Good luck to you both. Fairs in. 

Respect. I know I'm garbage and I don't care if I lose to 55 cent.

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put some respeck on that name

His name was Hummer when the battle started, he changed it. Just a FYI for the Hummer line.

This was a hard one to call.

But See because Seul slightly had more punches..

In a text battle punches obviously count for more but it’s not fair to give it on tally alone.

enjoyed both but picked the winner based on what I thought was the meaner finish.

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This was pretty clear. Seul, this verse didn't have anything particularly amazing in it but it wasn't horrid either. Arctic Ice, you lost this for yourself by having some serious flaws in your verse. 1. Your opening multi set was broken. Count the syllables. 2. wait / waiter? What kind of wordplay is that? If you meant the wordplay to be wait to / waiter, that's still bad, and you should have put the parenthetical expo after "to" instead of after "wait." 3. Reread the last scheme. Does that really rhyme for you? Hummer Got / Butler With... that's extreme slant rhyming at best. Anyway, Seul's verse was more polished and that got him the W. Fair's in.

Seul's punches hit a little harder imo. Fair is tossed. 

Good read ... winner was solid and tha last bar was really good imo, solid setups and witty punchlines throughout ... loser started off well with a really good punchline but fell off from there, mainly cos he started rapping about himself like tha HUMMER SO WIDE and MUMBLE TILL IT RHYMES lines ... overall one was more consistent here ... fair's in