Good luck. I got bodied tho

H&M line was creative af

Damn dope battle had to read it twice. I got my winner tho good shit from both. send me some barz

i like the punches  

Hummer: Your opening bar was your best punch in your entire piece. The AAA Scheme was nicely delivered/effective and was creative. The rest of your piece fell off from their by being too drawn out and taking too long to get to the punch(es) which took away from their sting. The first two lines after your opener didn't hit or really go anywhere/have any impact at all, they're more like filler to be honest. The ending wp, wasn't too bad though worded badly (imo). Gym-nast-ics/Jim nast-E... so little forced there. Overall: Not a bad drop. When i read your opening bar i was like 'oh shit, dudes upped his game an then some, if this how he bringing it, shit'.... but that was it. Only actual punch you had. Jimmy Hoffa: Opening piece was nice. Nothing major but was executed nicely though. The next bar was a nice & creative idea, however, wasn't executed well/was forced. MRSA isn't pronunced the way in which you're using it in the wp. Creative again though, none the less. The H&M piece was nice, good connection going on throughout the bar and a nice punchline too. Overall: One was more creative/complex with their piece than the other. Not a bad battle. The fairs in, im out.

W really had his shit together but i definitely was feelin ya shit hummer. definitely coulda swung your way with a couple of better punches

fairs in

Close but not really. Fv

Mini fridge line was jokes!

Hoff beasted from start to finish. 

Fairs

Both was dope im going with more bars and style of flow both were dope just felt ones rhymes played out smoother......no hate both keep doing y'all thing 

Clear winner here, but the loser had a nice flow. If he could just strengthen his punches with stronger set-ups, mixed in with the smooth flow he would be causing problems. The Jim Nasty WP was hella forced too, try to avoid those, it's gotta sound EXACTLY the same as if said naturally. Jimmy had clean execution and the h&m bar was fire, punches earlier in the verse werent the strongest but were decent. Fairs in. Good battle.

Jimmy was cleaner and more creative. Hummer showed potential but had a broken multi (count your syllables) and a wordplay that didn't work both ways. Watch out for that kind of stuff in the future. Fair's in.