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I've reread these again now for the second time. Both have some nice punches but fall in areas with the simplistic shit... going to have to come back. As it stands, it's 50-50....

Both had solid punches, flow and concepts here ... i have to edge it out to my winner cos his read was more entertaining which i felt was due to his execution ... other i felt had hits but also misses due to set ups imo which weren't set up to be witty and hard hitting like his opponent's ... fairs in, good luck to both 

This was a close battle both had some fire bars Rai's closer was fire and sho's opener was fire, you had a few bars that lost me like that 'been 10 Omnitrix' bit I'm guessing that's a cartoon or something probably would of been fire if I knew what that pertained too I feel like Rai's was easier to read through without stopping to think 'wtf does that mean' lol not that it didn't make sense cause I'm sure it did but gotta dumb it down for us black folk lol no h8 tho dope battle both just edging this to preference here , My eyes hurt like a bitch from reading all that too lol keep it up y'all . 

woowww

Shit cray..wordplay was rediculous 

great battle and very close . both came with plenty of personals and some heavy punches . couple of played concepts but mainly both had some great original hits . schemes were again mostly on point , lil stretch here and there but maybe thats cos im a brit lol . liked the build up and relevence leading to punches from both . personal fav bars were the 1-4 ratio by rai and the textbook example from sho . think it comes down to personal preference as both were close in all areas for me  . leaning towards one slightly as he had a couple more lines that made me laugh . nice shit fellas , and good luck to whoever progresses .

Expo: If you've never seen Ben 10, fuck off.

Ok: After rereaing many times. It comes down to this:Both have creative concepts in their pieces. Ones flowed smoother from start to finish. Better rhymes/schemes that actually rhymed. The other had the stronger punches/higher punch factor to his piece but fucked up in a few areas with the simplistic/basic shit. Wording and rhyming/mutlis in ceratin areas that shouldn't be happening in the LBT title match. Overall: It comes down to who i feel made the greater punch impact with their piece. the fairs in, i'm out. Good luck to both. 

32 IS A BIG BATTLE ....that said breaking it down woud take all day the better rhyming scheme came from my winner i had to read my losers verse twice to be sure this was a close on only imo no h8 #respect gb both and gl

Going to vote bare with me 

Look.. The way one was just so consistent. Smh. Took the battle over. Punch after the meta after punch . one had more filler other had better structure. Fv in kiddos

Rai had sum hits and misses, sum of the bars were lackluster for me but had a couple of good ones, sum of ya multies seemed forced which effected the punch, overall solid performance for a 32

Shodan had a little more hits than misses, his. Ads stung a

Accidentally hit da button 

but to finish da breakdown,Shodan bars stung a little more, both had a good match bar ironically, great battle but i felt Shodan edged this

Best battle I’ve read since joining ahh 

This wasn’t lite by any means so I read this 3 times each since last night. 

I felt the winner was complete in every aspect down to the closing 4. 

That Nawkout bar was on par with the omnitrix line and could easily be argued that it was better.. but I gave my vote as to who was more complete and consistent throughout. 

Close.

Great job to both for 32, I am leaning towards Shodan due to his bars giving me a bit more of a wow factor compared to Rais. Sho came with some really unique concepts and ways to flip them. I think both had a couple mistakes, mostly Shodans hard slant rhyming in certain areas, which kinda ruined a good flow he had. I wouldn't give him an L for it though. Rai had some great bars in there as well, but I think at the end of the day, it came down to creativity and I think Shodan takes that department. Good battle guys, and good-luck!