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Lmfao

Zak, that was so light, it almost seemed elementary. That closer was probably the lightest. BUT lyve, idk what's up with you cappin words that didn't rhyme but that threw your whole Verse Off. Why is 'Carving Guts' Capped? Anyway, the weird Text Placement was Detrimental. So Even tho Zak's Verse Was light Conceptually, It flowed A lot Better Here.

Good look Mac, I didn't realize I butchered the verse so badly. I wrote it in another device. Then tried to hurry n copy it over while at work. Was suppose to read ""ima BARGE IN both my GUNS gettin DRAWN QUICK/ you always START SHIT that's coo BUT thats a LAWL BITCH/ cuz one punch to yer gut and yer stature is fractured as yer ribs CARVIN out yer GUTS onto SPARLWED SKIN// i'll tear yer large intestient out, stomp yer heart on the ground, then puncture yer ARMPIT when its STRUCK wita HARD KICK//. Should of read it better.

Both did pretty good dispite the technical difficulty. I dont really have much to say in terms of advice Multies and better flow took this in my opinion