The fair is in and is cert. Loosed need to work on setups and execution.

MC had A Smoother Delivery. Simple decision here. Loser was choppy and was Inconsistent with his Scheming. Fairs

Maliceinchains just chained that dudes 4 limbs to a 4 post bed so he's strrrrretched out, sat on top of him, and then tortured him.

FV in

b not

First dude. Using ' in places that they're not needed. Also, don't dress your bars up with /'* type of stuff. Multis off. Usually i'd say you where throwing jabs though was more like the jabs of an amputee. Lot of work to do with your craft. Keep at it though, can only get better. Other dude edged this....slightly. Again nothing major to write about here. More coherent bars throughout your piece though multis and schemes all over the shop. Both have a lot of work to do with their craft. Keep at it fellas. 

Huh. Well, to start off with, both seriously need to learn the fine art of being careful about what they capitalize. Some of the capitalized segments didn't rhyme at all, like "BEGGARS CANT BE CHOOSERS" (6 syllables) / "MCGREGOR REALIZING HES A LOSER" (11 syllables) and JUST GETS HOE'S SLAPPED (4 syllables) / "SICK JOKE",-ACT (3 syllables). The first one doesn't rhyme at all, while the second one capitalizes a syllable that doesn't rhyme. Seriously bad. With all of that in mind, one's verse struck me as more coherent and bar-like, while the other was aggressive but the punch-attempts weren't really written in a logical fashion. For example, this beef is sun-dried? What? Why sun-dried beef? Where's the setup that has to do with sun-dried beef? Why does it matter that the beef is sun-dried? Oh, and one final thing. I think this site should have a The Aristocrats tournament. Fair's in.

Alright yo, alot of structure issues w/ both of you. My loser was easier to read, but he wasted first third of the box bigging himself up, rather than dissing his opponent. The winner, was hella hard to read but was dissing his opponent throughout, winner had multis that werent adding up and losers verse was filled w/ broken multis.

Both made mistakes, I am going w/ the one I think had more of an aggressive verse towards his opponent in a toss up. Fairs in.

TheContract.

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