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Read both verses thoroughly. You both had very nice drops. You both displayed nice structure, punchlines, set-ups, etc. You're both vets so there's no need to critique either of you on the specifics. My vote came down to who's verse I enjoyed more and who I felt came harder. Phenom, your verse had some really clever parts in it. Honestly I felt like you tried to be a little too complex with one of your rhymeschemes, which obviously leads to filler that rhymes, but kinda pulls from the intensity of the ending punch. Sometimes we try so hard with the wrong multie that by the time we think of a decent rhyme that matches up syllable and consonant-wise, we've constructed a rhyme so forced that it has little to no relevance in regards to the punch..so we have to then pull the reader all the way back to the set up and ultimately the punchline. Like I said, it rhymes, and you do a good job of long multies, but it can hurt if it's not damn near perfect. Jimmy's verse hit a little harder to me. From beginning to end was clever and he worked his setups through his lines very nicely. I feel like it comes down to preference. This battle could go either way....As can the votes. Respect on the good battle.

Hella close, both were strong conceptually. I liked alot of bars from both, but I am leaning this way due to my loser losing steam around his last bar. That Bart Simpson multi just seemed off to me. Where as the winner kept it smooth from start to finish, couldn't find many flaws in either to be honest. High 7's. Fairs in.

I straight did not like Phenomonon's flow. I though it was forced in a lot of areas, and the wording was not natural. I thought that a lot of the wording was arranged simply for the purpose of building to a punch, which made a lot  of the verse sound awkward. The punches were pretty poor as well, they lose a lot of impact when the setup is not smooth. I fuck with Jimmy's verse, although I thought it started to get a little played towards the end. Not sure there was anything truly spectacular in it, but I did think it was well composed and flowed quite nicely. 

Right, so this was fairly clear. One's concepts were a lot more fluent. The other dude's execution was solid, if a bit behind his opponents, but all of his concepts were quite forced. My winner had some serious standout bars, the best being the heroin > track bar. Fair's in.

For  me, one started out strong and then faded at the end. My winner had punchlines that landed a little harder and more consistently