OPS in this bitch!!

Lol, at least there weren't any compliments 

Expo: he has long setups, due to tha site errors, tha verse he sent me never worked

WP: nursery parts / nurse a rip parts , stable lies / stabilised

My loser was kind of all over. Had me then lost me on certain punches. Winner attacked that and win it for me.

Brayne, your opener and closer were the weakest parts of your verse. Middle of your verse was your highlight. Although the Syphillis punch took way to long to get to. Conceptually, I think you just need to keep the same mind-state you had when you wrote the fade to black punch, set up all/most of your punches in that general way. Entire first bar was a waste, and you wasted 2 and a half lines on it. MCKG, although Brayne's first bar was wasteful, it was true. Left Hook / Set Up / Jealous don't rhyme even if I say it in a British accent. I didn't really see this issue present anywhere else in your verse, well not to that degree imo. You did a better job trying to set-up your punches in the traditional set-up --> punch method, and it worked in your favor here. Conceptually, I still think you got a ways to go but there was some decent bars in there.

Brayne worded his bars a bit better, but they were lacking that oomph. MCKG concepts were decent to meh, but I think w/ some more creativity he can cook up some nice shit. For Brayne, I am sure he can get more punches set up properly as it looks like he wasn't really setting up his punches here, not all the time anyways... if he set-up his punches better this would of easily gone the other way. I could go waaaay more into detail about this, but I don't got that kind of time. This is just my two cents, I hope it helps. Fairs in.

Oh yeah, and im like 98.17% sure Brayne is a Multi of a experienced Textcee.

agree wit ya @Brayne Ded

My Winner had the better concepts and delivery, Braine had some funny personals but the concepts was missing you basically was just talkin shit instead of swinging .. got potential tho’

this Was Really a Tough Decision Even tho One Textcee is Elevating, the Other is Already on a Level Higher. Not the best from the winner and it took him A second to Warm Up But After Awhile it Became a Rather Murderous Verse. Fairs