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This battle is a lot closer than I expected. I feel like SWATT has been elevating recently.

Rai, I hate bold/italic/underline formatting unless it's used very sparingly, but I'll give you a pass on it here since it's really a personal stylistic choice. Anyway, I wasn't feeling your punches very much tbh... they had the obvious setup-punchline relations that you've become known for. Your execution was pretty solid.

MaCc, your opener was one of the type of bars that you do well - simple, but clever. Just as I was starting to think that you might have won, you dropped a da feet line. I'm not a prejudiced person for the most part, but man you have got to stop using da feet / defeat lines. The highschoolers quitting college concept was understandable and somewhat clever, but it was also logically forced - why would a high schooler be quitting college? Your closer was personal and somewhat creative, but also grammatically invalid. "It'll be rather easy to disarray" - that isn't a valid English sentence.

Anyway, this was closer than expected and hardly a stellar battle, although both were reasonably entertaining. I have a winner based on stronger execution and slightly better concepts. Fair's in.

OPS!!

This battle was close in my opinion, buth did well.  I lean towards SWATT, because the part      "His 'WRITS WERE NOVICE' & a 'BIT UNPOLISHED!'..So If He's Still 'Hype Off The Cred?' i'll 'Slice Off His Head' and Use 'Defeat To Reach My Goal' thats 'KICKING KNOWLEDGE!' till a Brain 'Drops Out Ahead' like Highschooler's 'QUITTING COLLEGE! "        was really good. 

best line for rai was the rings and watches one.

Best for Mac was the disarray line.

Or da kicking knowledge line.

Or da brain drop out ahead line

Man fv in some people like deep concept some people like direct punches . Either way it's fair . Fv in

Think this one will come down to voter preference. I read over three times and i came out 2-1 to Rai. 

Rai - You had a great verse well polished and connections were relevant. Your punches connected better than Swatts'.

Swatts - Your verse was practically on par, i just felt the punches were a little more aggresive on Rai side.

Good battle!

Think one was just fresher here. Both didn't have much wrong with their verse. It was just creativity and more unique concepts that took it. Fairs in. 

Rai had a bit more polish and packed a lot of punches in but I wasn't feeling a lot of them personally. Thought "torn from the start" was Rais best bar but the setup was kind of cringey for some reason. 

Macc I think missed an opportunity here. The rai through a blind punch kind of fell flat. I think if The punch was better worded it could have hit a lot harder. You coulda said you were gonna throw him through a window it something and all up that aggression. The next punch was ok but a da feet set up? Bruh. We're over that. You know better. The final wordplay wasn't great either. Coulda been executed way better. 

Overall I feel more like macc lost this, than rai won it. 

FUCK YALL.

One had better punches, other dude is getting boring its always the same shit. Fairs in

entertaining battle nonetheless  ...I felt Rai took this with more consistency n clever punches...altho’ Swats first bar was fire ..just didn’t finish as as strong as he started ..dope tho’

Quitting college bar was sick gg

one was just a lot cleaner in the structure of his verse and ideas were also much fresher.. the ther tries and fails in a number of catagories but keep it up my dude, the more you go at it the better you get..fvs in

macc, you had a much cleaner verse, easily. flowed better, and readability was much smoother...negative, was the punches were a bit weak, with the exception of your first bar which was the rai shine punch.. after that you kinda fell off, with a defeat wordplay which is a definite nono.. last bar diss aray wouldve been dope, if worded better, shouldve said, and its ironic that his 'writings are sloppy',when im the one into  DISS A RAY,.this reads better and the wordplay works both ways.. 

rai- punches alot more creative , but wording was a bit too runon and disjointed, didnt flow as smooth as i wouldve liked, try to work on the spacing between multis to make it flow better,. with that, rai edges this ever so slightly wit a bit better creativity and multi complexity.. had macc dropped probably one or two more hits, hed easily takin this.. 

hard to call but i need the credit these phony concepts are beyond the conduit meal for ad nauseum you both draw the grump card