This was very close imo. One had a solid flow but too much filler. Other was very choppy flow-wise but had better end product. One was a nicer read, other was more impressive concept-wise. Fairs in. 

EXPO: 21 gun salute/soldiers at a funeral service. Golf scheme about using too much gunbar filler every battle/ lastly- Get a head/sharp cut off/ guillotine flex 

I was actually pretty impressed with mechs verse here. Thought it was pretty good. Justvthink he got beat out by creativity and complexity here but otherwise it was a pretty even match. Close battle. Nice read.

Ilile my winner verse better. I felt he came line after line

Nice battle. One was a little cleaner. Made the punches hit harder.

I felt like this was a close battle. Mech had better multi's, so I'll give it to him. But not by much, Babylon had some fun lines.

Close af battle. Winner took it with better multis, the manufacture line really sold it. My loser was fresh though. I thought both did well, and its a lot closer than people will say.

This shit was closer than I expected, but one came out ahead with stronger punches.

Some specific comments: TheMechanic, the way you switched up your scheme near the beginning of your verse was awkward to read. I'm also quite sad that you didn't make good use of a Babylon 5 punch, lol. Also, Babylon, does Twenty really rhyme with Slummy? Just wondering.

Anyway... Fair's in.

Good battle here. Set up helped one win here. Liked both verses

That RAPPER AS BASE line was fire