This was kinda tough. Scruffy had a much cleaner read. He kept it simple with his concepts...some hit, others didnt. Inconsistent with his punches but it made sense. Foot scheme wasn't bad...if it was tightened up and finished with one of the idioms as the punch itself, it coulda won this from the start. MCKG was a bit more complicated....longer multis were good in spots. Jack is a messed animal didnt rhyme at all with what came before or after so that really fucked things up flow wise. Some of the punches needed way too much explanation and in some cases didnt make much sense (wild goose chase, gaggle). Futurama punch was prolly my favorite. Gotta go with Scruffy here....he took fewer gambles than KG but came away with a cleaner, better executed verse.

LBT!!

Expo:

Scruffy is a janitor in futurama which is set in tha future // "time machine", he thinks my multis are whack, and that they only sound clean clean when he reads em in Captain Jack's voice (tha Jack i mention is from Lord of the Flies - he forms a savage group who end up puttin a pigs head on a stick), he lost to Stu in a compliment battle and wrote super gay shit in tha one against newcastle, anubis was protector of tha dead and he had tha head of a jackal, Robinho is a brazil veteran and got sentenced for being in a gang rape // "11 vs his bitch" which could en his career.

Good luck fam

OPS!!

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Trapstars!

One was better then I thought it was going to be .  The other played it safe with some basic OK punches fv in

TRAPSTARS!

KG had better punches, scheme was good too. Scruff opted for play on phrases and some punches missed badly. fv