I got time today.....KG rhymed more fluidly and was swinging. He had a few good ideas but a lot of the concepts or their wording were just weird...One stretch in the middle, in 3 straight lines you called Dt a porn star, said something about a talking picture, and put a present in a box. You said you 'met the carpal' and told him he couldn't eat his nuts. I dont know what none of that means. You need to setup these concepts better, not just back to back to back punch if each one got nothing to do with the other.  I feel like DT gotta tighten up the rhyming in places. I dont know what Feel a Fairly be Temp hints means...maybe i smoked too much this morning, idk. The family guy concepts coulda been worded better, the bookbag straps line was botb..simple but was an executed concept from setup to punch. DT's closer was light but was correctly done and better than his opponent's....cuz I've never shitted with laughter over a donkey's ass. People need to try and read their verse out loud before sending it... if you wouldnt say it, dont send it. Dt wins by having more punches that were properly executed.

#UNION

#FUCK-A-OP

#WeSendShotz

is this tha undercard? cos im sure i was supposed to send...

dont matter... 

expo:

"snickers" contains nuts an caramel ... tha "suicide seat" is tha passengers seat an its proven that in accidents that tha driver will move is side of tha car out tha way, resulting in tha suicide seat being hit ... "talking pictures" is a Harry Potter kinda thing, where they can move from frame to frame ... he sed to me "get ready for my heavy punch bag bars", an when ya hit tha punch bag ya can break tha finger bones (metacarpal) ... in cartoons donkey's are known to laugh hysterically ...

OPS!!

good luck bro... 

oh yeah ... surface area increase when tha object is made bigger in some way, hence his "body hitting tha surface" ...

FvNoH8..winner had better flow

Oppsss!

Hmm... I'll cover each verse bar-by-bar and then come to my conclusion.

DtDaBeast:

Bar 1: First off, the wording in this bar was seriously unnatural. In verses, especially in multies, you want your verse to sound like something would people would say in natural conversation. "FEEL AH FAIRLY BE TEMP HINTS" does not qualify. The punch had a double meaning, but "flashbang" tying into guns is not very creative, especially since both meanings that you referenced directly tie into weaponry.

Bar 2: Eh, the punch was forced but alright. This bar's biggest problem was its multies. It had a two-syllable scheme and still sounded stunted. That's not a good look.

Bar 3: Again, unnatural wording: "FEW HE PLACED IN MURDER". And beef/meat concepts have been done to death. The Family Guy theme in this and the previous bar was nice but didn't make up for the serious flaws in them.

Bar 4: Do you drop the second T in "Text Is"? Otherwise, that's an awful wordplay, but I'll give you the benefit of the doubt about it. This was mediocre, but better than your previous bars.

Bar 5: Damn, this bar was so close to being good, but it isn't. The main problem is the broken second multi: the addition of "n" increased the multi count to 5 syllables instead of the 4 of the other sets. And one broken multi is enough to make an otherwise good bar unenjoyable. It's a shame, too, because the concept was fairly good and had relevant setups throughout the bar.

Bar 6: Eh. The internal multi, distances fingered / missing swinger, was broken, and I wasn't really feeling the concept. It was a decently written bar though, so perhaps other voters will feel differently than I do.

Bar 7: This bar had some good relevant setups and was well-executed. The problem here is that kg/kilogram nameplays are incredibly obvious, so any concepts including them have to have a very original twist to be good, and this didn't quite qualify even though it did have a twist.

MC KG:

Bar 1: Huh? I get the snickers/nuts double meaning but I have no idea what the punch is supposed to convey.

Bar 2: Never His Scene > NHS. This acronym-play is an interesting concept, but honestly unimpactful. A rap battling proverb is that if something needs to be expo'd, then you should probably change or scrap it. And I suspect that few or no readers would have understood the National Health Service reference without the expo. A general comment about this bar, and this verse in general, is that some of your multies don't rhyme to me, but that's probably due to accent differences because we're on different sides of the Atlantic, and I'll give you the benefit of the doubt.

Bar 3: Again, this needed to be expo'd - at least for me, but probably for most other readers as well - so it's probably wack. The raised arms / crucified setup was alright but it's also been done to death.

Bar 4: I don't get this at all.

Bar 5: Well, you had back to back punches at least, but honestly they were all simple or played. This bar was alright due to sheer quantity, but the punches were of fairly low quality.

Bar 6: I don't understand the double-meaning here. Metacarpal, that I understand, but what does "met tha carpal" mean? Maybe I'm dumb or ignorant but I am seeing quite a few punches in your verse that don't make sense to me.

Bar 7: This was another bar that needed explanation to be impactful... I dunno about this. The area's gonna increase / surface wordplay was interesting, I guess? Eh. I wasn't feeling the last punch.

My conclusion about this battle is that both verses had some interesting concepts, some uninteresting concepts, and many major flaws. One's punches were more impactful and that earned them the W. Fair's in.

Damn !! 👌

lmaooo ya should make him a cheesecake for that!!!

Dope Battle. Both Came Swingin'

Winner - Soild Multis & Concepts. Edged w/ Consistent Punches

Loser - Soild Multis & Set-Ups. Just Didn't Hit As Hard.

FV NO H8

finally my verse is makin sense for someone loool!!!

Neither wowed me but I'm my eyes o.e edged with this better readability more than anything,both had certificate punches/set ups. One hasn't changed a bit since I was around years ago-forced ideas and schemes that are scattered at time and finally over.complexity only.due to.hurt this individual. The other wasn't to.complex but not.to.simple either which are for the perfect storm for him here, being more direct with wordplay and less bronchitis gave my dude the win.. the fair ones CLASSIFIED

Feel like the two of you tried to be too complex. Honestly made this a rather teadious read. Putting it simply, I'm going with the one that I felt was less forced and threw a couple of decent punches together. Feel like both can do better than this. Fairs in, good luck.