I got time and this is close so Ill nitpick a bit...Rai's schemework was impressive and was definitely the more personal of the two verses. I thought the Bingo idea was clever and so was the camel idea. I think some of the setups were a bit long and in other places the wording or reference was wonky. 'cud drop some nasty shit', no TONGUE WHEN TASTING ASSHOLES...did the cow regurgitation drop nasty shit? Did the tongue tasting the asshole drop nasty shit? "Shocked when your dawg rant was banned". I get the dog collar thing but banning a dog rant just doesn't sound natural.  Overall, the scheme work and personals were the strong points but more concise setups and tighter wording/references would turn good ideas into great haymakers.Shodan's verse was definitely superior from a wordplay and wording standpoint. The setups in most places were crisper and had a direct correlation to the punch.  The 3 back to back law enforcement jabs were cool and the opener and closer were among the best ideas in this verse. Some of the rhyming isn't as crisp in spots...using 7 and 8 syllable multis is tough. Slant is easier to get away with when you carry a rhyme scheme 4-8 lines cuz it blends in a little bit. Carrying a rhyme scheme a little more in places woulda helped with the readability a littlePirouette show was a bit forced and Enter/Inter is a bit of a stretch even though the punches that followed were both pretty good. Both battlers played to their strengths....Low 8-High 7. I just think Shodan was a bit more creative and had the harder hitting bars because of better execution from setup to punch. Good shit by both of yall though.

EXPO:

You press a button on a computer to boot it

Rai Scarred / Race Card

Peer uh wet Sho / Pirouette Show

Dis cord he in / Discordian, Discordianism is a joke religion

Close and a nice battle here. I'd probably give BOTB to Sho, thought that closer was fire. Overall though I'm gonna have to edge this to the person I think was more consistent and the slightly easier read. Fairs in, best of luck lads. 

Imma come back to this damn!!!

One just edged this for me with harder punches an better personal bars, plus the Multies scheme was dope. Loser brang it tho for sure! Just opinion, great battle.

 fair in

solid from both here, took me a few reads to vote ... i choose my winner based on tha fact that their whole verse was one personal punch after tha other, had some nice concepts too and the verse sounded as good as it was read ... loser just didn't have enough here imo, had some really nice concepts, wordplay was nice tho so props to that homie, but his punches weren't as hard hitting as his opponent's ... my fairs in, a really good battle here guys ... .OPS.

Dope battle from both, one had the smoother read for me and gave his punches more of an impact, was digging my losers concepts but felt like they werent executed as well as they could of been. But good luck to both fv nh 8-8 

Pen't

fair is in.one edged it for me..!! vb 

This was a classic 100. Both dudes had haymakers but I preferbally like ones angle more and the creativeness of his multis

Good battle Fellaz Got my Winner off the 2nd Read I felt Rai's verse was Alot Smoother and the Punches Connected with Some Dope Multis Creativity was Decent I liked the tasting ass holes line also I liked the Bleu line ..Shodan you had a few good lines I liked the upper hand in argument line I felt you're Verse was a little bit more Complex but you were lacking in the Punch Area..Overall I felt Rai Got this was more Consistent and with more Substance fv no hate~

I took the time to read these multiple times and read the expos  and then read again. I think sho ended very strong but took a while to ramp up. Rai also took a while to ramp as well and the beginning wasnt as string as it needed to be. So im judging based on the second half of these and i feel sho just had a little bit more Creativity in his punches. This is a close one 

NOT ENOUGH PUCHINES!

Vote- Rai

I think both really brought it, this was a good battle. A lot of this was even in my opinion so it boiled down to which verse I was feeling stylistically more.

no hate, fair vote.

aight

One was predictable to talk factz. Threw some personals. Like.. The wordplay was ok but the pumch that it expresses isn't damaging to me.. 

The other was best line was the ending. Major fuck up tho. 8th line.. ..you almost lost it all of it wasnt for the ending.

 All in all one was less impactful to me . the other wasnt mr fantastic but good and all were hits and not misses. Fv in #UNION

Close battle, but I felt one had slightly better concepts and impressively schemed his entire verse, while the other (although having a solid verse with some really impressive punches) was a tad less consistent.

IDK. this was very hard to choose.