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YoungShaolin (31%)
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Reppin: United States
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Reppin: Santa Monica, California, United States



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Battle started: September 1st 2017 at 17:13
Challenger joined: September 1st 2017 at 18:36


Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2017-09-01 18:36:07).

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Young Shaolin had a pretty interesting flow. The punches were mad simple and didnt come often but were understood and executed.  Raw Dawg has the format down but some of the punches (land on chance, battleship) made no sense or had little impact. I liked the attempt at using a board game scheme throughout but it kinda limited his punches and variations of plays he could use.  And dont criticize votes in the battle...IM the person that placed it and get an expo one on one

Posted on: 2017-09-03 18:07:49 Private Message Esso

 
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YoungShaolin
Basic Member

Good Verse

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Posted on: 2017-09-01 18:43:30 Private Message YoungShaolin

Shodan
<BLaM>
One Bar Champion
Fair Voters Club

Hmmm, hard choice here.

YoungShaolin was going off with the multies but was lacking in terms of concepts, punches, just general humorous or creative impactfulness, plus the multies were a bit off in some parts (Natural Asshole / Rapidly Rotting ??). It was solid overall but still flawed.

RAW DAWG, I liked the way that you wrote your entire verse while referencing one theme (board games). There were a couple issues with this verse though. One, you capitalized things that didn't rhyme - you don't always have to capitalize an entire word just because part of it rhymes, like you did with CONCEDE TO. That's a minor stylistical flaw but something that people on here don't like to see. Also I felt that you didn't do much to make your references into impactful punchlines.

These two verses were about on the same overall level but had hugely different strengths and weaknesses. I'm leaning to Young overall though because I felt it more. Fair's in.

Voted: YoungShaolin / RAW DAWG
Posted on: 2017-09-01 19:08:33 Private Message Shodan

Dessaline

Fv in fellaz

Voted: YoungShaolin / RAW DAWG
Posted on: 2017-09-01 21:04:05 Private Message Dessaline

YoungShaolin
Basic Member

I respect yalls votes but i feel like both of our verses are better than 4's 5's and 6's.

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Posted on: 2017-09-02 17:33:00 Private Message YoungShaolin

Bape

Both have massive room for improvement but that being said, there's also a lot of potential here. What I thought made my winner here as the fact he conformed to the LB format making it an easier read and also schemed to a better degree with his multies. Fairs in. 

Voted: YoungShaolin / RAW DAWG
Posted on: 2017-09-02 19:14:09 Private Message Bape

KG The Prince

holy shiiiiit, lmaooo... winner's verse had me rooolin with all that game shit haha, had some real nice punches too, tha setups at tha end could've been better imo, but ya got this easy (AN STOP DUCKING ME!! i'll show ya how blood SEEPS THROUGH hahaha jk)... loser's verse was nice too, gotta cap his multis and make his concepts more creative, so his punches hit harder... fair's in... APOC...

Voted: YoungShaolin / RAW DAWG
Posted on: 2017-09-02 20:04:04 Private Message KG The Prince

$k1pz

close. fv. ys was savage wit that shit. fiya

Voted: YoungShaolin / RAW DAWG
Posted on: 2017-09-02 21:51:49 Private Message $k1pz

Curfew
<HITTERZ>

Winner more polished 

Voted: YoungShaolin / RAW DAWG
Posted on: 2017-09-02 22:14:41 Private Message Curfew

Bnas
<MvH>

both were alright here and shined in different categories. WInner been on a good streak salute

Voted: YoungShaolin / RAW DAWG
Posted on: 2017-09-03 00:41:21 Private Message Bnas

Light skin
Basic Member

My winner game board scheme was cool

Voted: YoungShaolin / RAW DAWG
Posted on: 2017-09-03 06:29:07 Private Message Light skin

READY_ROB

Raw dog was ok winner had gassed it all the way through no hate both good battle.

Voted: YoungShaolin / RAW DAWG
Posted on: 2017-09-03 12:08:09 Private Message READY_ROB

 

 
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