First, respect for the effort. second kudos on the bars, hella nice. the approach is fresh for me which makes for an entertaining and enjoyable read. I dont offer advice nor do i critique, i leave that to the old heads on this site. never the less i must vote and the winner had the cleaner verse as it was alot smoother to read imho.  my vote is in. 

loved this battle fvin the forced word play fucked one up to me

This was an alright battle overall but since Painn asked to provide some knowledge I'm going to mainly focus on the negatives here. Don't hate me for it, alright?

First off, repeating words is something that you usually want to avoid in battles. This applies to multi sets, punches, and lines in general. TTG's second and third multi sets both began with the word "EVERY" which hurts fluency and looks uncreative. PaiNN did something similar with his Patrick Star punch; opening with "Round house kicks" and then saying Kicked three words later. (Variants of words, like kicks/kicked, usually count as repeats).

Another thing to avoid is capitalizing things that don't rhyme. With very very few exceptions you don't want to do this because it will confuse the reader and make you look like you don't know how to write good multies. PaiNN did this multiple times, capitalizing the words PANTIES and NO LEGS LIKE, neither of which were rhymes.

Finally, there's the issue of punches that just don't work or make sense. Maybe I'm ignorant or stupid, but PaiNN, I have no idea what you were getting at with your JURISDICTION opener. Also, Diddily / Italy doesn't work as a wordplay - where did the opening D come from? Both meanings of wordplays need to be phonetically identical and make grammatical sense, otherwise it's forced.

Again, I hate to be this harsh but I'm here to drop knowledge, plus it gets me riled up when I see people who have solid potential and writing ability in some aspects of battle rap make elementary errors in others. Fair's in.

(I use My Own Scoring System)

TeeteeGee 7.8 (7-7.9 = Really Good-Borderline Great)

PaiNN 6.9 (6-6.9 = Pretty Good/A Lot Better than Average-Truly GOOD

Honest & Fair Vote. I really liked both, but TeeteeGee's Punches just hit a littler harder & it flowed a tiny bit better to Me. Ans PaiNN, I thought you had some Sweet Concepts, with the whole Spongebob/Bikini Bottom stuff, but I thought your verse just needed a little tightening up, & if 1-2 of your punches hit a little bit harder, it might be a different outcome... but I could see how someone could vote in the other direction too, that's just My Opinion... GB.

TTG best line for me was lost to every DUDE HERE to CHERRY ROOT BEER...decent line....Winner i felt gassed it all the way through.....no hate 

Vote= TeeTeeGee

TTG: Loved the cleverness, some the “keep it simple” thing pays off. Creative and witty as hell. The essence of battle IMO.

Painn: good creativity, maybe a little too complex or too stretched. I didn’t follow all your lines and schemes. I like how u tied the Patrick Star and Bikini Bottom together. 

Good shit to both, no hate.