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Comcast is a place in Kentucky. It's just like saying your gonna knock someone to Africa. Just thought I'd explain a few of my bars..

Meant to say somewhere I'll give him a "5" cuz that's as good as the FUCKER CAN GET lol

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My loser came with some hard shit... But that winner here had a well set up verse, and his punches hit harder... Keep at it y'all... Fair vote... APOC...

Both need work, troubleshooter clearly sucks dick which deserves a 5 and Sutherland is a faggot who ties his victims to beds and tickles them which is also a 5.

Loser had a dope beginning and winner fot it with bars and flow....no hate both keep doing yall thing 

Sutherland: You came with an interesting approach, initially with you capitalizing "OLD ELDERLY COUPLE" I thought this was going to be a vets verse, as that's a skillful multi to use (6 syllables) & while you did in fact keep it up okay you should always go for keeping up the rhyme scheme instead of adding in a punchline that doesnt fit with the rhyme scheme at hand. The way you dropped the "OLD ELDERLY" portion just to rhyme wiht "HUBBLE" did lessen momentum and impact overall- next up, ALL WEAK/ALL WEEK is a fairly played wordplay but I did like your execution of it FALLING/PAULIE is simply too basic of a rhyme to be impressive tbh, gotta keep up your standards you set in the beginning of the verse with your six syllable multi man, going down to two is just too below par to remain impactful after displaying that you clearly have the ability to carry a more complex rhyme scheme.  Last bar was okay, cool conceptually but this also had some slight rhyming breaks. 

Overall I liked your ability to form concepts behind your bars & your punchlines but your limited rhyming is inhibiting your full potential.

Troubleshooter: You started off much more basic in terms of rhyme-scheme complexity, but instead packed in rapid-fire rhyming every 2-4 words to keep up fluid momentum, next up WHAT DORKS and SMUCKERS dont really rhyme so that kinda breaks this rhyme scheme a bit but the grasp at the 'insides leakin out' concept was there, go for more stuff like that. The next internal rhymes were suuper fresh & fluid, definitely started carring good momentum around the BUCKLER STANDIN bar which was super solid all around, you kept going with the fluid internals fairly perfectly while mainting some at least okay similie punchlines which is the reason I gave this battle to you.

Overall one had a more polished grasp on rhyming & fluid structure which overpowered the opponent in this case. Tight battle though gentlement keep elevating & focusing on your craft.

Both had some played material.Sutherland had more jabs while Trouble shooter had the cleaner verse and and structure but wasn't feeling the punchlines as much. Close asf..Both got mad potential. 

Troubleshooter, you started Off Pretty I'll But toward the end, the concepts were kinda Confusing and Off but your delivery was Decent. Suth' you started Off with Promise. I could see where your Scheme was Going but, 'Nubble?' What is that? U kinda reached to get that scheme to work but your ending punch just didn't come heavy enuff. Both both of you fellas got Flow. A rematch would be Dope. #Fairs.