One's verse was structured a bit better and executed their punches a bit better. My loser needs to get used to the format. Caps lock rhymes etc. just look at what everyone else is doing with their verses. Hope this helped, fairs in. 

my winner dominated this battle, w/ creative concepts, and setups which made punches harder hitting... loser gotta try to improve his verse by reading more battles, maybe his opponents verse... fair vote...

Both were pretty good bur winner was just a little better

You gotta try lads,you gotta try :)

Loved the opening multi from my winner. loser needs to check out some tutorials but has some potential. fairs in fellas keep at it

damn this was a crazy snipe dtdabeast just had way better rhyming and more coherent themes setting up his punches. no hate tho

Dt was fine, all felt a little forced. but talgo can hold this L

Even imo 

Talgo u were like a beast. AWESOME