never do side notes, but the rgp is random gun play, and rg3 is a revolving gold .357, like to change up gun names..just me though...anyway, good luck bro

One was to basic. My winner switched it up and did well putting together this drop both guys need much work but good job

Both had some serious issues with the multies and this fucked with the flow. To explain it yo you, your words that you're rhyming should have the same amount of syllables. I got my winner here as I thought his verse was a lot more clear. While my loser went off on a couple of tangents and I had no idea what he was getting at. Fairs in. 

DOPE READ FROM BOTH

Good battle... close

Honestly i can tell both are rookies when it comes to battling, both seem to be nearly on the same level with a bit of work both could be good battlers, with that said lets get into the voting

Don - you had the cleaner read, along with better punchline attempts and better construction than your opponents

RawDawg: your opening line was your highlight here, then fell off a bit, rhyming was too iffy at times