Both of you had comeback fv gb I like how one said be damn humble and the other said come in my portal !

wtf does that even mean

Clear winner here for me ... all round more complex better set ups and punches also BOTB .... dope shit .... my loser I know this is your second verse reading your comments from your last battle ... so keep it coming bro keep trying .... hit me up if you need some support ... .:X:. 

Winner took this by a wide margin. Outclassed his opponent in all categories.

Kspeed started off swinging, pairing a seamless rhyming fluidity with some back-to-back conceptual punching, that set the tone for an A1 verse. The following bars held up quite impressively in terms of the essentially perfect 4-6 syllable rhyme schemes though conceptually I think at places some deeper thought couldve advanced the impact of the concepts at hand. Ending bar was the least impressive bearing a broken multi and the weakest concept of the verse, in my view the first and last bars couldve been switched with each other to maximize momentum. Ending with a crescendo paints a more complete picture of the impact within your verse.

ifohancroft Your rhyming here was quite basic, you should really focus on using mroe words in each rhyme scheme so that you arent limiting yourself & your creative abilities. Once you do that you should look more into structuring similie/metaphor based punchlines. Good battle gentlemen. 

just think Kspeed did better overall

Think one was more complex here, with the higher syllable count etc. Loser need to improve his scheming and maybe think of more creative punches/wordplay. Fairs in, decent read. 

lmao @ the comment. again not much to say here winners got nice setups and punches sad to see this verse go to waste. fairs in fellas keep grinding

lol i dont know what was goin on...fair vote tho...my winner had good punches and multis...

winner had the best all around verse, opp. needs more structure to his verse. no hate vote..good luck to both

Pretty easy decision, winner had the more experienced verse, had better multis, wordplay and punches-loser showed potential in the way he flipped his opponent's punches and set his punches up, but his simplistic rhyme scheme and punches severely lowered his rating