Winner got this based on experience. Think he was just too advanced for my loser. My loser has a lot of potential and should deffo stick at this though. 

AN OK SPAR..... LIKED PIXELS BARBER LINE, IT IS A PLAYED CONCEPT BUT I LIKE THA WAY YOU USED IT AN SET THA BAR UP,  THA HYUNDAI - DIE ON A HIGH LINE WAS A REAL NICE CONCEPT BUT I FELT YOU COULDA EXECUTED IT ALOT BETTER TO ME IT WAS A LIL SLOPPY AN IT CAME ACROSS A LIL CONFUSIN (had to read it twice). THA KG (cage g) WORDPLAY WOZ SLIGHTLY OFF, IF YA SAY THA TWO WORDS ONE AFTER THA OTHER YOU'LL SEE WHAT I MEAN. LIKED THA CLOSER 'DROPPED A REAL 8' WOZ WHEN HE TURNED 19, LMAOO, THAT GOT ME.... YA STRUCTURE JUS NEEDS A LIL TWEAKIN TO HELP THA CONSISTANCY, YOU GOT PUNCHES JUS NEED TO BUILD EM UP A BIT BETTER... YOUR FIRST AND LAST BAR WERE REAL GOOD ITS THA MIDDLE BIT THAT LET YA DOWN SLIGHTLY. 

MCKG STARTED OFF GOOD THA ADAM SANDLER PART MADE ME LMAO AN AT THA START YA MULTIS WERE ON POINT THEN YA KIND OF FELL OFF THA CONSISTANCY LADDER MORE AN MORE AS THA VERSE WENT ON.... I LIKE YOUR CONCEPTS ITS THE STRUCTURE AN DELIVERY THAT NEEDS WORK, THA TURTLE RACE LINE WAS A GOOD CONCEPT JUS WRITTEN IN A HALF ASSED WAY, YOU GOT POTENTIAL LIKE IVE SAID BEFORE, I THINK GIVE IT TIME YOU WILL GET THERE.... 

MY FAIRS IN, GL TO BOTH.... peace

Winner had more creative concepts, more wordplay and better punches-loser struggled with readability at times, and he didn't really lead up to his punches at all, so fairly easy decision here.

Clear winner for me here however my loser your showing progression my dude keep at it I see you've picked up puns just need to work on how you structure your bars around the line now ... good shit keep at it ... .:X:.