My vote came down to punches as well. I'm a little less harsh on Aggo's verse though as I felt it was just about equal with Rai's verse. Honestly, this was really close in my opinion.

7 out of 10 overall on this one.

Expo. His old account was alkatraz. Rohaan accused him of getting his bars ghostwritten by manhattan.

After the lighting strikes you can tell how close it was by how long till you hear thunder.

Get da fabric ate'n = get ta fabricaring 

Rai on =rayon (a synthetic form of cotton)

Bury the best parts=berries the best parts (crunchberries are the shit)

Good shit Rai, good luck.

both brought the heat but 2nd dude flow little smoother and concepts little slicker imo. dope battle.

Aggo had semi better punches. My opinion

So

Dope Battle for sure!

Aggo: Like ya opener..after the Batman bar u kinda started slacking a little but picked it back up towards the end, " Guy is Pathetic" Lies for Attention" didn't rhyme for me, liked the Manhattan line, the captain crunch line was fresh flip..I felt u could've been a little more agrressive overall..I like your style but when u have that type of style your punches need to have that KO impact

Rai: you came out swinging from beginning to end, punch after punch, ya multies had long syllables that connected well which is hard to do, also i liked ya personal bars a bit better, no real KO punches but enuff to overwhelm your opponent

close battle no doubt..When it comes down to it I felt Rai took this with a better structured verse and personal punches had more impact, I respect both battlers both ya'll did ya thang I love reading these type of battles...fairs in 

DPS!, btw.

VERY GOOD FUCKIN BATTLE....... I ACTUALLY REALLY DUG BOTH VERSES, THIS SHITS GONNA SWING..... IVE HAD TO READ THIS TWICE OVER.... VERY GOOD PERSONALS AND NAMEPLAY FROM AGGO SHIT HAD ME ROLLIN..... REALLY LIKED THA CONCEPTS AND CONNECTIN PUNCHES FROM RAI SOME NICE WELL EXECUTED SHIZ........ THIS WAS A REAL TOUGH ONE TO CALL LIKE I SAID I HAD TO READ IT TWICE....... BEST BATTLE IVE READ SINCE I BEEN BACK.... SHAME ONE OF THESE VERSES HAS TA LOSE REALLY...... DOPE FROM BOTH.... FAIR VOTE IS IN... peace

Close. Both came to this battle with a similar level of skill. I think my winner got this with his concepts being more fresh and had a tad less filler imo. 

This battle was fyre, Aggo with Personals realy came with heat here, the Manhattan line went in realy well, a lots of Quotables in his drop, but I felt the Captain Crunch lines was way old I've seen it before n heard it before, but he took a couple of shots that damaged Rai, this 2 lads multies game was quite even to say the least, The closer kind of hit hard out of the lines he came with imo, 

Rai: I think he got his structure/punch down pat. Was expecting nameflips but he didn't touch on them, had to Google M.s Cleo's line so it won't throw me off.looks it came off gud..had a few share of personals wich I think made a much bigger impact the fair is baked, Ya'll both on fyre with this..

Solid read from both, but the winner pulled my vote from his top-notch wordplay, as he was still able to maintain solid multis and punches while laying on the puns. Loser had really good multis, but couldn't match the winner's wordplay, which led to less powerful punches.

Losers lines was good through breakfeast brunch to captin crunch...Winners lines was ROBBIN WILLIAMS ON THE STAGE WASHING DISHES AS A MAID....DOPE READ from both stay doing yall thing 

Good battle here. Got to give it to Aggro for a slight win. Could go either way tho. Keep dropping that heat tho. i had fun reading it outloud.

fyi more beef

Aggo: Thought you could of done more with the lego bat man line, solid wordplay and concept, just missing the exucution, the lightning line/thunder was a good punch but it wasnt set up that well and was a tad bit drawn out with filler, the fabricating wordplay a bit of a reach IMO as the correct term would be 'eaten', The Manhattan line was a nice personal (real or fake we'll never know) but the set up was meh, the serial killer concept was kind of played and there was a broken multi near the closer that had too many syllables "BARS FROM KIDS IN DIFFERENT CREWS", closer was creative.

RAI: Decent opener, you set up the punch with 2-3 jabs before finsihing , thought it seemed like a big build up for a decent punch at best, though. 2nd punch was also set up with jabs, (none of which really stayed with the theme). The doubtfire concept was creative but the way it was worded kind of impacted the punch strength, "clean up his act" doesnt really work both ways, idioms can be tricky. Old rag was one of your best puns, good build up that related and funny punch. good shit. wasn't really feeling the closer, stayed with the  jab-jab-punch technique but the punch just wasnt hitting hard for me. 

Vote: One had better set ups (even though a lot of it didnt relate - oh well) while the other had the stronger punches overall and BOTH had played material. Going with the punche sover the jabs here, good spar fellas. 

This was a dope battle.

Aggo- The opener was a little bit too wordy in the build up to the main punchline in my opinion which took some of the effect away. The Manhattan personal could have been flipped around a bit creativiely but i thought it was a bit bland and more of a statement than a punchline. The thunder clap was a great nameplay/concept. Bar of the verse for me.

Rai- Props for the same scheme but i think it definitely limited your creativity here. The robbin williams line was dope. I like how you used idioms to set up your punchlines right from the build up. The votes/politicians was a bit of a simple simile in my opinion. Closer had a good personal but the punch was kind of meh in my opinion.

Overall my winner had better punchlines and wording, my loser was dope, just had a bit of filler which didnt really have any impact. Also winner edged it based on the execution. Fair is in

Aggo: I've seen better work from you, I feel you only used around 70% of what your actually capable of here, not knocking the verse though it was solid, highlight of your verse was 'left alcatraz behind & ran straight to Manhattan'. I'm going to toss you a low 7, though this could be high 6 work

Rai: almost every line was critical, smooth delivery along with maintaining a professional amount of punchlines and concept work. High 8

This is a fire ass battle, both went in hard, direct and came with personals. Winner just had a sick ass back to back scheme that read clean and easy...

good battle here! aggo that manhattan line was crack and well executed props! With that said, my winner was more creative with his coneptual work and i therefore enjoyed his verse a bit more

One's first punch was killer, almost flawless imo. Second punch had too much buildup for a landing that was underwhelming. Fibers synthetic another decent punch landed in there. Nice flips in the next lines, I think that along with the beginning were some of the highlights of your verse. Well done, good shit here.

The other used one rhyme scheme for his 16. Risky move because the rhymes should be precise if you're gonna try something like that, which they were (for the most part). Hard hitting stuff here, went way heavier with personals than one. So all is fair when the vote is in

fuckin FIRE battle folks. this was a sure heater. both dudes swinging to the fences, multis on point and the wordplay from both was extradonare. i think one had a better personal bar in this that edged it but this could go off preference no doubt

My winner connected his multies and rhyme together better. Both had fiya tho!

gb

Got dam this was close, Aggo had better readability (flow) and his whole verse went together better but I got Rai edged this with harder hitting punches. Fairs in fellas, I can breakdown further later.

Preferred ones style over the others. And think the verse as a whole hit harder. Good battle.

Hmm. Hard choice. Aggo had some clean, solid punches. Nothing I can point to as great but a decent verse overall. Rai had the hard verse to judge here. On the one hand, scheming a 16 with sensible, consecutive punches is admirable. On the other hand, your wording and slanting were in some places mediocre to awful. Aggo would have probably won this if he'd brought some heavier punches, and Rai's finishing sequence (everything after CONDESCENDING LITTLE FLAKE) is what edged him the battle. Great effort from both, but I have my winner. Fair's in.

ok good battle here aggo had good concepts but i felt they could have been executed a tad smoother and they woulda hit harder rai for me had an impressive multi game and his connections made the read flow great my winner just showed me more with his verse and connected a little more

Winner schemes better and threw more punches. Loser came nice with personals but just not enough punches

My loser had to much filler not enough pins my winner went in with the puns man line after line .... that's what I like to see and read just puns on puns dope read .... can't remember the last time I saw a battle with this many votes either props ... .:X:. 

Ok after 3 reads I've made my mind up ...tbh I liked aggos opened and closer better . Consistent punches thruout and likes the fibres and synthetic line as well . Nice flow and multis w/o much filler . Rai again cam with some nice punches thruout , but feel he utilised the use of a scheme to very good effect .likes to Lockhart and robin Williams Lin's. Both has highs but few lows so close call , but feelingbonws just slightly more but think it gonna be Hella close in the end . Great spar. 

sraight fire,Man sometimes you just have to base your entire decision based on one line when the shit is so close.. it was a hard call between the misses doubt fire line and the batman line... the movie refferences...seems like some bad blood is in this shit aswell.i dunno.