Winner was nice loser was alright..no hate both keep doing y'all thing 

Ones beginning could have improved if they used the rhyme more establishing an image of consistency. Good on you rhyme some longer sets but in the text format if every syllable doesn't rhyme it will hurt your cause. The other was basic in their style, used very short rhymes at the end of each of their lines. Also had a problem distinguishing if uppercase letters were used to identify a rhyme or the end of a line or was simply used for emphasis

Felt one got this, despite conjoining words realy close, it put off the readbility til the mid table of the verse, the rest hit home, the other just wrote bars that didn't hold enuf wait to beat his match the fair is in..

One sided

T got this easy.