So, apparently I forgot to send this in the exclusive league. My b.

Felt one had a more clever concept while the other had smoother multis. Voting toward what I thought had the stronger impact. Good work guys. 

Read over this a couple times and I got my winner. My winner just had a little less filler imo and that made his setup better and punch come off stronger. Fairs in, best of luck. 

DPS!

So this is was a tough one for me. 

Aggo had the simpler bar imo but Rican's multis were kinda weird at the beginning. Also i felt Aggo's punchline hit better with me just because the concept was better. I'll elaborate, by that i mean Aggo's punch was more natural as to where Rican's idk about ya'll but ive never seen a fight at a patio cookout . Maybe like twice in movies lol. But both bars were solid Aggo's just resonated a bit more with me is all close one guys. Votes in. 

Aggo- Fucking with 3 can tied in with the open relationships part in the main punchline, it was setup smoothly as it tied directly and wasnt a vague wordplay on its own. I like the fact that you tied in the idiom in the build up; "goes down swinging" with the "open relationship" analogy and executed it as a punchline. I felt that you could have replaced "broke up in pain and shit" with a better multi but its understandable as the multi that you used ties in well with the open relationship concept you had. Overall i felt that everythin in the setup and the build up tied in with the concept in the punchline directly and the punchline itself was creative.

Rican- The whole "Daddio smooth..dudes out" bit was unneeded as it served no purpose but just had multies and a braggadocio thing going on. Not to mention it didnt tie in with the punchline either. I know what you were thinking when you said "swing at his grill/fights at patio cookouts" but it doesnt work both ways...when you're fighting someone in a patio cookout, you dont swing "AT" their grill as in the cooking apparatus. I understand the grill/teeth reference but like I said, it doesnt work both ways. Overall- I felt that you had a decent concept but it wasnt executed/worded properly as a punchline.

MVGT Aggo for having a more well put together bar with relevant setups/idioms and a far more creative concept.

I felt one was a bit smoother here, even if the concept was simpler. Seen better from both but readability took this one for me.

Both with some broken stuff it was a ok battle. One was forced from the jump so it gave away the W. Now both you niggas vote back fair

Think the is the 1st time I've ever re-voted, but ones wordplay did work a tad better, i think I read the bar too slowly and missed the wordplay. Going this way as the wordplay was fresher, and we've seen the grill wordplay before. 

I also read the word "can" like in soda can..lmao

Felt ones concept was a little bit better even though both were good..

Man this was close.

Aggo: I liked the Rihanna concept but I feel like it's too obvious, I don't know, pretty sure I've written a Rihanna bar for Rican so it's like if I thought of it, it's gotta be played, I'm too unoriginal. Anyways, I think it's a stretch to say three which as a hard th sound sounds like Ri unless you have a weird accent that cause you to say your R's as Thhh. Other then that I liked it worked with the Rihanna or drinking concept with the twist in the end. Give this a mid-7, above average, not quite gold.

Rican: Liked concept / ending punch but felt like the begining part was too filler, that didn't pertain to the ending. I just feel like 1 bar doesn't allow you to brag / ego-trip. You could've been more direct is all I'm saying. High 6 for the wordplay / punch but built-up wasn't quite there imo.

Liked this battle :cool:

Ok....just a few lines aight im going with more multis on this one no hate both keep doing yall thing both was dope....

Do I really need to split hairs here?

DPSet!!