EXPO: (Mortal Kombat characters in bold)

1.Sub-Zero 2.Ermac 3.Smoke 4.Baraka 5.Johnny Cage 6.Shang Tsung 7.Raiden 8.Noob Saibot 9.Jax 10.Mileena 11.Sonya Blade 12.Sektor 13.Kitana

Fuck, I forgot to bold "Lose" right after Noob...

...I meant to say that in reference to LIU Kang...

Wasn't thrilled with these ones. Raidens first multi seemed a little forced and his punch wasn't stellar. Cek had a reference heavy bar that just fell flat for me. Never been a huge fan of that type of reference wp. Punch wasnt anything special. 

Hmm, without your expo Cek I'd struggle to understand that bar. I'm still not the biggest fan of it knowing what it means now. Overall I thought this a good battle both gave it their all so props. Got my winner edging this by being a bit more smoother, making his punch harder hitting. 

The main difference was one excuted their punch better do to the fact it read smooth and they didn't over do it. ...This a classic example of doing too much can be a bad thing...I know u were trying to go for a mortal kombat scheme but it didn't hit right do to the fact u put had too many references and it also hindered with the flow...In short kinda forced

Fairs

Good shit yall felt ones scheme outweighed his opponents fv nh 

Raidan had a pretty good bar, but the punch seemed forced. Comedians working with construction crews was, as a concept, probably made up to fit the punch, so it didn't flow fluently. The bar itself was solid though, good concept and well-executed mostly. Cek, you incorporated a shit ton of references, which is interesting, but the bar itself didn't jump out of the screen at me, ya know? It was really lackluster overall... I'm not sure how to express what I'm trying to criticize about it but it just wasn't a great piece of writing. Decent battle here though, but one took it in my book. Fair's in.

I've read this a couple times. Rai had the better structure & set up.. Cek, I fuck with all the MK references. Feel like Cek had the more entertaining read, but for one bar it's all the punch. Neither punch hit that hard for me, but I gotta go with Rai for the ending punch landing harder. Gb