Fuck I'm used to doing 8s that was a haul for me.I'm not doing an expo though if you don't get it use google.

okay this was a good read. Both brought some creativity.  Good choice on running a 16, it really gives the artists enough room to flex a Lil bit. Pablo had some good lines, I don't like the way you transition to the next line though, work on that. Also stretch the concepts a bit. Cousin had bars to, flow and delivery need worked on. keep practicing you have skill obviously.  You actually had my fav bar in this battle, 'tie you to a car to go that extra mile' 🔥

To the first guy ur rhymes were okay nothing was broken as far as multis went..U had okay lines nothing that really stood out to me tho...but okay verse

The other had broken rhymes and such but u did try to bring some concepts tho... I got one edging do to the fact their verse was better put together...

Pablo:You had some good jabs that landed and you had some good ideas/ fresh concepts. I felt that your execution was off though. If set up better (More multis in between set ups, more set ups, schemework, better wording) that your punches would land harder. You were stretching at times (too many words inbetween a multi) and unfortunately that hinders the readers ability to follow along while maintaining the flow of your multis. For instance, your final punch had 14 words inbetween a multi set. Overall, some tweaks and more schemework will have you taking it to the next level. Cousin:You need to make sure that you'r using multi syllable rhymes that pertain to your overall concept/punchline. You were capping a lot of stuff that had no real rhyme to it. You did attempt some punchlines but there was no real concept to them. Make sure you have complete concepts. You need to work on your multis and having complete concepts.Overall...I had Pablo winning this battle. Fairs dropped fellas. If you got any questions hit the inbox

Gs. Manhattan I normally don't focus on mulits like that I just enjoy punchling.. I understand how a properly used mult can lead to a solid punchline. but if i'm capping it chances are i'm just trying to show my aggression when saying that punch and not that i'm trying to lead into things that rhyme. don't get me wrong I know I can used work on my flow but for the most part its something I do for my own writing purpose. I will work on it doe. 

Shit was Crack🔥