There Meant To Be A Comma Between Whinchat And Winged

Trini. One of my biggest problems with the way you create your verses is using vague references and then relying on a word in parenthesis to alert the reader to what you mean. In a battle rap, imagine a guy on stage stopping in mid verse because he said pop at one point so he turns to the audience to let him know this is a candy reference before he continues his verse. It hugely detracts from your shit and is an indicator that your setups are not doing the job they should be. Craft your setups in a way that you don't have to stop to let me know explicitly. It should already be evident and if it's not, you need to keep working it. 

Liz, your shit was barely readable. 

Trini had some alright attempts at punches (not good, just alright), but the awkward inline expos of references that were either obvious or utterly tangential detracted from readability. Work on having cleaner multi sets and clean punches that don't require any sort of inline explanation. Lizman was a hard, esoteric read (as always), but there were actually some decent punches in here. Krill, piggyback, will smith... all solid stuff. Fair's in.