Your trash 

Kill yaself

Online so everybody can see it

Winner had a pretty nice verse. Shame.

Bobby lol

Bobby Message me 

Nucleus is pretty much right though lol

clear winner here

dude sound like Andrew dice Clay

This was a clear steal. Experience topped this off 100%. Let's start with the waste. I like the vocabulary here. You've got potential in terms of that. Where the rest of hip hop lyricism is concerned, you're sorely lacking, but don't let this bring you down - Take criticism and work it in, and never stop practicing. For the clear winner, you took this pretty solid. For the first time I can say I've read a verse here that actually shows some balls. I feel like you take calculated gambles with how you structure your bars and always achieve what you're after as a result. By that, I mean you've got a unique way of setting up a punch and in the very next line, you'll do it differently but it won't throw off the line before it nor the line following. It works well and you've the versatility to pull it off. Well done.

Don't listen to the hate bobby you'll get better with practice. Obvious winner today though, remember to fill in the box. 

It's clear.